This was so cute! Touching and steamy all at once. Great read
That's a really interesting idea I think you could have made it a great slow but
This one might have made me year up a little. You did a wonderful job with this story. Kudos
This is sweet :(
Second time reading this, and it is still wonderful. But I still hate baka Yasha in this one. I hope he suffered. I mean what the hell? Kikyo is deaddddd and he was never loyat to Kagome. Like Sango said "sleeping with the enemy" grrrr. Still LOVED THIS EXCEPTIONAL TAIL
I loved this story. It was awesome. Thanks
Wow, this is expertly written and amazing. I love it.
O.o wow. thats all i can say is wow!
hiiiiiiiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i saw on ur profile that the black dog was completed and on here soooooooo i had to look for it and finish reading it i haaaaaaaaaaate waiting XD
i cant believe inuyasha =.= real jerk like JEEEEEEEERK!!! it must of been torture for sesshoumaru to wait 500 years to see her ;~;
i would love to see how her family will react when they find out kagomes gone and if she'll tell them that it was her annnnnnnnnd i wana see how she stays in her human form with a sword and mooooooore juicy lemons ;3 I WOULD SOOO LOVE TO SEE A SQUEAL!! :3
I wish it had a better ending. You know where she confronts her mother and tells her everything. But I liked the story anyways!
loved it! maybe you could make a sequel to this? just an idea.
This was a very AWESOME story!!! I really LOVED reading this! :D
This was great! Might I add also that you should write a sequal? The ending to this was absolutely perfect and open for more possiblities. I would definitely like to know if they find something that would help her stay in her human figure without a sword. Perhaps a necklace? Or some other smal trinket? I would also love to know if Inuyasha made it through the 5 centuries, so he could apologize to her for his complete assholishness. It doesn't have to be terribly long. Maybe 5-6 chapters to get all curiousity out of the way and satisfied? Which ever you decide. I won't complain to overly if you decide upon leaving it as it is. ^.^
holy shizz! I LOVE this storie! izu wanty more! i love it so much! oh and i also loved the lemonz ;) and yea the end was beautifull! im goiing to miss thos story T^T
That was really an awesome story, I enjoyed it more than i thought i would. Your writing style helped a lot in that case, lol. You don't give unecessary details, and to the point. It's what most reading like in a story.
I only wish there would have been more to the happy ending, or maybe a sequel?
Though i doubt it, it would be real nice. Again, great story and keep up the good work!
Amazing, beautiful and compelling. i loved it. Aimee-chan
i am starting to like it keep it up
I LOVE IT
The dog concept was very different than your normal fanfic but I still love it!! :D
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