I agree with the others, im not a song or poem fic kind of girl, except for maru cause hes a boy. But i liked this very much. i was pleasantly surprised. I enjoyed this very much, and the poem or song, which ever added such a neat feel to the read. Very well done. THis is a beautiful example of such creativity! Wonderful story.

I'm not usually a huge fan of song-fics/poetry fics -- I love your poetry, but I find that in this context it actually takes away from the story somewhat because the reader has to flick between the poem and the story itself. That said, the story was good. I would have liked to see a little bit more interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome, but on the whole you seem to have an interesting dynamic going on between the two of them. 

I like the way it manages to start on such a high for Kagome and plummet so low. Similarly, I liked the way you included that little bit of self-doubt she had (haven't we all had that about a boyfriend at one point or another?)

Thanks for sharing.

Nefret.

Ah. I'm not a big believer in the whole song-fic, or poem-fic, things, so I probably won't take you up on that offer, I will, however, leave a review. ;D

I like where you're taking this. It's kind of explicit, and sort of slow-moving, and nothing really big has happened, besides the whole break up scene, but it's good. I guess I'll see you again mid-July.