I have to say that your story is nothing short of amazing!! I find it very refreshing in terms of plot because I read all of it today! I would say keep it up, and I admire this writing. I just wanted to point out though that in many of your chapters you keep reiterating Sesshoumaru's feelings of Kagome (like her softness) and sometimes repeating almost the same phrases over and over... which can make the story a little dull--BUT! I am very happy to have happened across your story, and I thank you for gifting us with it! :]
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patience is not one of my strongest abilities and i appreciate you helping me to try and exersize that but please update! i can't waite too much longer or i just might faint...
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yea that's rite. i'm still waiting for the next chapter...
ooops haha I meant "update"
Review! Review!! Pleeeeeeease!
I really enjoy this story! Please update soon! :)
OMG!!!!!!!!!! I'm surprised you updated that fast! Amazing chapter please update real soon.
yup can't remember a singel charcter who comes in enough contact with Kagome that didn't change and even when there was very little contact many still changed anyway. you captured Kaede well ^__^
So I'm wondering how many chappies of Kagome's suffering will you do before she can be free? How long will it take to convince Kenji and the other elite guards that Sesshou's beliefs are wrong? How many centuries will pass before Sesshou changes for the better? I look forward to what you have in store for Kagome and can't wait for Sesshou to pay for his actions. I really hope that Kaede's words will come to pass soon. Keep up the good work and update soon :P
AWSOME CHAPTER CANT WAIT TILL MORE!
This is a unusual fic. The first one I've come across in this manner, and I find it extremely enjoyable. Kenji gotta love that one, he'll see the different brand of freedom and then won't be able to handle it!
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omg great chapter thanx i wonder what will sesshomaru do with this new found information will he take out his anger on kagome or maybe accept her as a person sooner or later
I have to hand it to you. This is a great chapter. I'm glad that Kaede gave Sesshomaru to think about concerning Kagome. She DOES change people for the better. I'm sure Sesshomaru will not be an exception over time. Sango needs to keep her mouth shut if she wants to help Kagome with her situation. I see a lot of hope for Kenji in all this. As for Inuyasha and Kikyo, I would love to see what happens with them. Let the punishment begin. I have a feeling after what happened in the palace that Inuyasha doesn't want anything to do with his pathetic excuse for a mate, barren or not. I don't think he's going to care too much about that. I also have a feeling she's going to stab him in the back eventually, then he'll be left with nothing but his Tetsusaiga, the clothes on his back and the broken rosary beads. I'm sure every village will know about their betrayal and the pain they inflicted on Kagome. But, for some reason, I don't think Kikyo gives a crap if she hurt Kagome in the past, using self-preservation as an excuse. If given the chance, she'll do the same thing to Inuyasha before she truly goes after her and Sesshomaru. She did make a silent vow that she would wreak vengeance on them. And another thing, congrats on this fic for winning several categories! *cheers and claps* Can't wait to see what happens with the doomed 'couple'.
this is such a good story please update soon
eh, it was kind of short but i loved it none the less. keep writing and update soon. and Kenji is starting to grow on me(:
ah Sesshy, he can be so stubborn and pigheaded sometimes no? Anywho great chapter and i can't wait to see what happens next!
Oh, thank you so much, Texanlady! You are amazing! At first I was all confused at how the chapter was going w/Kenji and all but as I read along that explained things. (Btw, I'm glad that Shippo and Rin are so cute together. Playing and whatnot c;) Ano, the thing I was most confused about and what made the chapter so worth the wait was on what Kaede said. (Kudos on how well you got into her character). It was wonderful how she just explained everything I wanted to know. I was so puzzled at how things were going to work out and how that dang collar worked too @,@. Ano, you are one of the greatest! Please update more often! Plzkthx!
P.S. hope life is going well for you d=
famous last words seshomaru! famous last words.
i can't wait for all the dram and action and all that to start! seshomaru, brace yourself. because i have a feeling after this chapter, things are going to be oh so confusing for you and i am going to have fun watching you squirm! bwahahaha!
@ texanlady:see what you made me do? i cackled. cackled!
Well then...! Lol. Update Soon!
What a wonderful web you weave.....I find myself hooked on your words as if they were a dark and dangerous drug....
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