Please update soon. Thanx
nice story you got here, thanks for updating even after so long :)
Ahhhh! A cliffhanger, you're so mean!!! I love your story, update soon please. :D
I love this story, the pairings, and the explanation of how Kagome came to be. I hope you get the chance and inspiration to write more.
I look forward to seeing what happens next!
-Forgotten!
Great story, I read it on fanfiction. Keep it coming.
Eklipse (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
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tseying (Chapter 24) - Sun 10 Jan 2010
I love love LOVE the story! CAn't wait for the next chappie:)
stars (Chapter 24) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
| will you please updata this story
MLMonty (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Feb 2009
Okay, so i just started reading this and I got to ask: So why was Kagome's mom in the emergency room giving birth? It was a rutine delivery she should have been in L&D (labor and delivery). Even if it hadn't been her hospital they would have sent her up there. Or was she sent there? If that was the case why would the ER nurse leaver her desk to take her mate there instead of just telling him to go to L&D?
*shrugs* Sorry it's just one of those real life things that don't add up that gets me. The point of fantasy is to make others believe your fantasy.
please update soon........ it's getting very interesting.
Lilium (Chapter 23) - Sat 29 Nov 2008
Please update soon. This story is sooo good>!!!
stars (Chapter 23) - Thu 02 Oct 2008
| I love it please update soon
| i love it update soon
Lizzie (Chapter 23) - Sun 25 May 2008
| Me likey this story, one of only a few alternate universe fics I really like. Good job, and get the next chappy out soon!!!!
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