A very amusing short.
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Aug 2008
Very relaxed conversation over tea, wish I'd been invited! Intriguing story, makes you want more...
I like the story, however, I feel it is a little...unfinished? It makes a good one-shot, though there are so many questions that are rather unanswered. Such as, why is Kagome there?
Otherwise, I enjoyed it. It was short, rather sweet and amusing. I like how you presented Sesshoumaru; he seemed like most people, usually they are more comfortable and open in their own homes.
Nicely done.
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