I'm not a fan of directly qouting a song in any type of story. Still, I thought this was a very interesting idea for a series of oneshots, and I also liked that you used COUNTRY songs. Watch out for grammar and spelling errors. Just rereading it a few times helps a lot with this, as spellcheck often doesn't catch certain mistakes.

This is an interesting concept that I've never heard of before-- so points for being original! Also, the first two chapters were so sad! It brought tears to my eyes!

Keep up the good work! It's interesting to see Sesshomaru portrayed uesing the syntax of Country music... :D

I like the idea of using country songs as the basis in these stories, but after the first one it was really hard to see how they would have connected to the Sesshoumaru and Kagome fanfiction idea...I would go back and make it a little clearer as to how you tied Sesshoumaru and Kagome into them...A simple way to fix this is to add a little more to the story the songs tell...There are some spelling and grammar issues that need to be addressed, but that is nothing a little editing won't fix...I believe you have a great idea going here, and with a little bit of work this will be shineing for all it is worth, Keep it up!!

I wish you would have added more of a story. It was really just lyrics. I saw many grammatical and spelling errors, so I would suggest reading through after you have wrote just to check for that kind of thing.

I like the idea, but I think you need more of a story with the lyrics. In the first story, you might want to change the name in the lyrics to chacters in Inuyasha. It might add a more sess/kag feeling. The other stories need a little for mention of Sesshomaru and Kagome too. I think the stories would work better if you did. But the stories as a whole I liked!!!

Interesting idea but I think these need a bit more Sesshoumaru/Kagome relation.  You can at least see it in the first one with switching his name for Jonny's but the later two really don't have any connection to Kagome/Sesshoumaru.  Perhaps if you wrote a story to go along with them, instead of just using the lyrics, you could get more of the pairing in there.  Also watch for your puncuation and grammar, I noticed quite a few mistakes, espeically words not being captialized that should be.