Wow...umm that was an interesting read. The detail was wonderful, and the concept was to die for...umm literally in Sesshoumarus case...It sort of seemed like a mix of 'A Christmas Carol' and 'Dante's Inferno'...only with a far more deadly ending. One thing really bugs me though...other than the peach schnapps that was only a little odd...why didn't he bleed out well before the clock struck nine? Demon or not, seven hours with his injuries shouldn't have even been plausable....*shrugs* Oh well, well done anyway.
Well, that sure earned its warning! Very dark, and very twisted, I really liked it! I did think Sesshoumaru was a tad OOC, though, as I can't imagine him crying, or even showing that much visible fear; I just think he's too proud for that. I can't see him drinking peach schnapps, either, and I don't think he would be so out-and-out rude, more of a you-are-too-far-beneath-me-to-be-noticed rude might work a bit better. You really worked the dark theme well, and I find myself reminded of a Christmas Carol, just with no hope of redemption. Loved it!
Hairann (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
Interesting idea for your story. Though I admit I just skimmed through it, as I am far better at writing then reading gore, but I love the consept of this story. Kinda like the Christmas Carol, only with a far deadlier ending.
Wow, I have no words for this one. It was wonderfully written and very detailed. A little too macabre for me but very nice overall. It only makes sense that all those things Sesshomaru has done would come back to bite him in the proverbial ass.
Teana (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Aug 2010
I love the concept of this fic. I found Sesshomaru to be OOC. I was wondering why schnapps? It just seemed TOTAL out of place. I found parts of the fic to be going in circles. I found myself rereading things trying to piece the story together.Very good though
~Teana
Two big issues: 1) why peach schnapps? I dont really picture him as a schnapps kinda man, but all the same it gave me a giggle! :) and 2) I though Sesshomaru was very OOC even for being drunk. Otherwise a very interesting concept. Thanks for posting!
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