This reminded me exactly of a story in a Zane book I read a few years ago. I think it was her book Chocolate Flava. I like this version of it. Good work.
This is honestly the first story I have ever read where Sesshoumaru came about being with Kagome by dishonarable means without it involving his beast. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I felt that it was quite true to his charater to be someone who stops at nothing to get what he wants, even if it means killing the one she loves. I especially enjoyed the other view of Lu, without it I would have had a bit of trouble just seeing Kagome let him go. It was an excellent little one shot.
holy crap that's freakin AWESOMESAUCE!!! i live this! *faves*
Claire (Chapter 1) - Mon 07 Jun 2010
wonderful oneshot...tho im hoping it will become more...anyway im so sry about ur mother but this is a great fic! great work! keep it up! i hope u write a sequel :D
Wow, this is awesome! I don't know why I didn't stumble across it before, I hope you have written more! So sorry about the loss of your mother, but a joint artistic endeavor seems like a lovely memorial to her...
Wow I never would have guessed (at least at the beginning) that Sesshoumaru killed him ! I started suspecting when his father called though...
Very enjoyable story !
gurl we are going to have to talk about this. This is so like her you kept the wording and everything perfect. Nice work
| Wow that was very very well done. I loved the twist. I wasn't expecting it! Bravo! I truly enjoyed it. I'm sorry to hear about your mother. I too, just lost my mother (Sept.3). She wasn't into fanfiction but she knew I enjoyed reading it. So, I know how you feel. *hugs*
autumngold (Chapter 1) - Thu 13 Aug 2009
| What an amazing story! Sesshoumaru is incredibly clever to get away with Lu's murder and to make Kagome fall in love with him! Lu was a creep and Kagome is lucky that she didn't catch a disease from him. Not that I'm agreeing with his murder, but. . .
I really enjoyed reading this story! I am so sorry about the loss of your mother! Thank you for taking the time to post the story that you two worked on together!
| This has got to be the most intense one-shot that I've ever read. It had me at the edge of my seat from start to finish. It kept me on my toes with all those vivid descriptions of lemony goodness. And I was in disbelief when I learned the actual truth at the very end... Will you be making a sequel? I want to know how Sesshou will convince Kagome to be his. How will Kagome react when she learns of how Lu really died? What was Kagome's reaction when the truth got out that Lu was sleeping with other women on the force? How did Kagome end up marrying Lu? How will Kagome feel about being pregnant with Sesshou's child? Does she have secret feelings for him that she's been denying for all these years? I would really love it if you could answer these questions in a sequel. Keep up the good work and I look forward to your future masterpieces! :P
| Wow. That ending was quite shocking. I wish someone would do that for me if my husband was such a jerk like that. I'm sorry your mother passed. Thats always a difficult time. But I do say your ideas are brilliant. I haven't seen a really well written, addicting story like this in a couple years. I'm exciting to see what will happen in the next chapter.
| I'm sorry about your mother's passing. It's wonderful that you and your mother shared an interest in anime and fanfiction to the point that you worked on a story together. And it is a great story, too. It kept me wondering about the truth behind Lu's death the whole time.
| I am so sorry to hear about your mother :'(. You have my sincerest condolences. I liked the story, I thought it was sad how much of an ass Lu was. He certainly had what Sesshoumaru had done coming to him.
Jasmine (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 Aug 2009
| OMG i was crying thru this tory i love how you trick us in the end are you going to write a sequel to this. I wanna find out if kagomme is ever going to find out what sesshoumaru did plz ?
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