jojo661538 (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

this is a great story keep up the great work ^_^


S.A.M. (Chapter 2) - Sat 08 Aug 2009
Finally! An intelligent Kagome! I love it! I don't know if your muse will allow it but I really hope you can turn this into a full blow story (i.e. more than three or four chapters <3 ). I really, really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing ^^

pinkslytherin (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Aug 2009
Hope you do add another part! I would love to see everyone's reaction when they mate!

pinkslytherin (Chapter 2) - Thu 06 Aug 2009
Hope you do add another part! I would love to see everyone's reaction when they mate!

NightQueen (Chapter 2) - Wed 05 Aug 2009
I can't tell you how much I really enjoyed reading this story. This chapter was just as wonderful as the first. I love the developing relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. The intelligent conversations show them on an equal footing of mind and spirit. I really hope you write another chapter or 2 or 3!! LOL I think it's the start of a beautiful story.

Dana (Chapter 1) - Wed 05 Aug 2009
First off all, I thought that was a very intelligent piece you have done here. Secondly, awwwwwwwwww :3 And to finish it off, I would like to comment that I loved the relationship that you formed between Sesshomaru and Kagome. I look forward to your second installment. My only minor detail here, is that the scene of Sesshomaru and KAgome kissing, was written well but there was definately a word that seemed out of place - "as she explored his chops" chops does not fit that in my own opinion. To be honest (and I am not being insulting, simply a little humor), I kind of thought of pork chops when I read that. BUT overall, I thought you did a fantastic job

NightQueen (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
Absolutely wonderful story! I love the discussion between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. It's nice to see someone write her with such intelligence. I can't wait to read the second half of your story! Well done.

Tana_san (Chapter 1) - Tue 04 Aug 2009
I truly enjoyed this. It seemed as though Kagome has finally met a kindred spirit, maybe even her soul mate. I loved the kissing scene. It was really romantic until you put in the phrase, "she explored his chops"... I kind of stopped and re read that thinking I was wrong and then had to laugh because it threw the whole thing out of whack. But anyway, I found the encounter believable and Sesshoumaru and Kagome's character exact. I believe he could become attracted to a woman who could talk intellectually while still holding that youthful spark within. I await the next installment. JEN

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