I think this is your niche - AU, modern, especially post-apocalyse/trans high-tech settings. Heh. Intruiging beginning :) Especially with the miko staked to the tree. Nicely balanced with the humour found in the interaction between the brothers. Just becareful of the little things: "But the Western Lord soon had his brother hastily bearing his throat..." Bearing vs. baring. Homonyms are a slippery bunch. ;) I look forward to future chapters.

Love your story! hope you continue writing and update soon!!!

You've given a really interesting twist - well done! I look forward to more.

Dang! Awesome start! Great flow, good grammer and intriguing to boot! I look foward to any and all updates you make on this story :)

That was fantastic! I found myself laughing a bit as I read the emails between InuYasha and Sesshomaru (low blow Sesshy, low blow :3). Also, your ability to keep Sesshomaru in character in a modern set story was wonderful. I look forward to reading more Dana

I hope you do continue this! Goodness, it completely captured my attention from the onset. It was hook, line, and sinker in the span of a few minutes and that doesn't normally happen with me. Excellently written with great detail and character portrayal. This has great potential so I'll be interested in seeing where you take it.