this is a very great story that i love and like alot since i first started reading it your a very great author who wrote this very great and wonderful good story.
Hello,
I like this story. it is well done and I can't wait to see what happens next...I wonder what that lady did to Sesshomaru...it will be interesting to see what happens next.
good job and update soon...
This is good! This is awesome!
autumngold (Chapter 4) - Tue 06 Oct 2009
Fabulous update! Poor Kagome, to basically be away from Sesshoumaru for three years, waiting for him, and he comes back with someone else. Hopefully his family will be able to save him before he mates her. Please update again soon!
MLMonty (Chapter 3) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
| The biggest problem I've is dialogue. It's confusing. Everyone is in the same paragraph! I don't know who's talking most of the time. Each person is supposed to get their own paragraph when talking even if all they say is 'hn'. That cuts down on the confusion....as long as you don't fall into another trap of not putting in 'Sesshoumaru said' or 'he said' or whatever every now and then. If it's hard to read people won't.
Adriana (Chapter 3) - Fri 31 Jul 2009
| yay Sesshoumaru came back for a visit! :) is something going to happen to Kagome or Sesshoumaru?
update soon
Adriana (Chapter 2) - Thu 30 Jul 2009
| I LOVE it!! :)
update soon
| Nicely done! Will she have many suitors? Who will try to seperate them? Will Kouga be after her too? Keep up the great work!
| Great first chapter! You have a good foundation started for your story.
| That was sooo goood!!!!!!
I loved Destiney is amazing!
I am glad you didnt keep it all locked up to yourself!
lolz
XD
!!
| This was very good. I'm interested in where this is going...
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