Hey your story sounds good I'V read what you have so far and was wondering when you were going to add more
I like your story and hope you continue!
BloodValkyrie (Chapter 2) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
Is there a lemon chapter on another site? If so, where is it?
BloodValkyrie (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Jun 2010
You made me laugh my head off! Sesshomaru . . . Whimpering and Whining? Anyway, I think that technically it isn't bestiality because Sesshomaru is more competent than a human. Maybe I'm wrong; I don't know.
InaLaInu (Chapter 2) - Thu 10 Dec 2009
OI!!!!! put the next bloody chapter up!! i'm totally loving this and totally annoyed you havent updated :(
good story so far i hope to read more soon
yi-chan (Chapter 1) - Tue 24 Nov 2009
I'm hooked! You can depend on me to follow this story. I'm very excited to see how this turns out.
OH MY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have no Idea how much I'm loving this, NO IDEA!!! LOL I am wondering though if you have posted more on AFF.net and if you have what the name is if it's different! I really hope you post more soon cause WOW.
hugs and puppies
LeLi (Chapter 2) - Sun 15 Nov 2009
it started out good and then a had sum dirt in my eyes >wipes tears away< overll GOOD WORK!!!! i hope you do keep on going with the fic plz. I would like to see where this goes! >_<
Lauren (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
I LOVE this story so far!!!!!
autumngold (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
Kagome's story is so sad. I hope that she learns to forgive her father. I can't wait to learn how Sesshoumaru became an actual dog. Will he be able to change back to a human? Does he want to? Thank you for the update! Hope you can post again soon!
Blaire (Chapter 2) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
You updated~
....I have to admit I was kinda dissipointed the whole chapter was taken up by a flashback and none of it present tense, relating to kagome and her new pet, but please update more often. I'm a little confused because this chapter really doesn't seem relevent, but I really liked the first chapter and story description so I'm sticking with it.
Thanks
Yea I have been waiting and waiting! I liked this chapter, but I wanna read more so please update soon!
Rei (Chapter 1) - Fri 02 Oct 2009
Why you would feel the need to rip out the chapter and split it to another site when it's already rated MA (can't get any higher) and has warnings posted is beyond me. It would be a pain in the ass to constantly switch sites seeing as I'm usually on this one, and wondering when I do read it here if I missed anything, I imagine it would be unnessesary annoyance for you as well. But I guess as long as there is a link I can't really complain. Your story is really good, I hope you continue it soon ;3 I first read it a couple months ago when it was first released, and I had to check again to see if I missed it's update. It's just getting started and I'm already hooked. Your OOC character Machiko is funny :3
Looking forward to the update, till next time :p
Rex
lynnd (Chapter 1) - Thu 17 Sep 2009
can't wait for the next chapter,
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Sat 15 Aug 2009
i don't know why but i like the stories when sess is in his beast form! it makes it a lot interesting! please continue!
Ah, it's a shame you're thinking of censoring when this already looks to be an interesting story. But then, you're the author and it's completely up to you what you post. I'm just glad you decided to share your work where I could read. It definitely piqued my interest and I'll be watching for more!
reader3 (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
wow I fail, I meant beastiality, sorry 'bout that
reader3 (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Jul 2009
It seems really good so far (even though the mention of bestiality kinda makes me squick a bit but I can deal), but I think you are allowed to post some of the...more explicit stuff, if you will, on here (you can check the rules if you want). Which is a lot more than what I can say for ffn. Keep up the good work ^^
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