I liked both chapters so far! I could actually feel like I was right there with Kagome in that first chapter in her own hell. I was really glad that Sesshoumaru came to her rescue when she did and look forward to their interactions when she is more coherent. It sure will be intereresting the confrontation that Sesshoumaru will have with the shard group. In a way, I feel bad for them thinking all this time that Kagome was out there somewhere but not realizing that she was actually kidnapped and tortured the way she was. But on the other side of that, they should have known that something was wrong for her to up and disappear like that with no word or notice. I'm looking forward to more regarding this story because I have to admit that your story has me intrigued. Keep up the great work and hopefully you update soon.
sunset in love (Chapter 2) - Thu 16 Jul 2009
i'm honestly intrigue to how the plot would be played out, With inuyasha firmly believed kaggie to suddenly left them without a word might potrayed as if inu is; (1) did not have faith in Kaggie or (2) never knew Kaggie for what she is worth or (3) just plain stupid... he should go looking for her, at least tried to find her in the future. It is most unlikely that the northern lord knows about her origin since he apparently had neglected the fact that the miko in question is actually the Shikon Miko, therefore, i choose to believed all 3 and more, thus, having sesshy relaying the circumstances of his "finding" might be very interesting.... and i sincerely hope you would update soon, it's definitely awesome!!!
This is a truly intruiging start! I would LOVE it if you would pretty please continue updating.
kelly (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Jul 2009
You should definately continue, its morbid but its good. I'm hocked!
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