You captured a moment perfectly.  I look forward to reading more.  Thank you for sharing this with us.

In response to your forum topic, I actually have no idea why you didn't get a lot of reviews for this. There were some minor typos, but they weren't distracting in any way because I understood the meaning and the rest of the prose was very lyrical. I almost felt like I was reading a dream, if that makes any sense. It's not a heavy Sesshoumaru x Kagome fic, but more of a quiet silent one, much like how you made Kagome describe Sesshoumaru. I really liked it because there was a lot of presence in what you wrote. I could visualize the warmth of the room and the fireplace and the contemplative but comforting athmosphere.

I would really like it if it continued, but at the same time, because of the way it stands on its own, I feel like it might be ruined because the picture is so simple but complete, showing the change in so little words. It almost felt like time was being represented because it matched everything else. I hope you write more pieces like this.