I spent two days reading this story - AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it! I love it I love it I love it!!! This was so cute! It was brilliant- a very original piece, you should be proud of yourself! It was romantic, it was passionate and wild, and funny! You have quite a talent, and I look forward to your future works!!!
~Sandreline
| OMG, this story has been the only thing I've been able to concentrate on for the past 4 days! Such an amazing piece of work, I'm only sorry I hadn't found it sooner. Thank Wiccan for referring me to this wonderful gem!
You have some amazing talent, and I thank you for sharing it with us. I'm sure your other stories are just as great, but if I start reading them now, my schoolwork will NEVER get done!
Oh, who am I kidding, I'll probably read them anyway.
| Great story so far! Yes, it gets me to when I spend time making eggs for someone and they want ketchup on it, lol.
| Hurry Sesshomaru-sama! Save her!
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Zoku (Chapter 43) - Wed 05 Aug 2009
| Well done, I really enjoyed reading it.
Your frequent updates were awesome, thank you for your hard work!
-Zoku-
| Way to go Lady O!!! Another brilliant ending with Seesh finally taking full contol and determination in getting HIS woman back where she belongs! He didn't think about having all officals with a radio hearing him until he was half way through and that was just so perfect. I'll imagine the gossip flying wild after Guillermo(William) tells everyone they left together. I once knew a guy from Guatamala with that name. If you don't know the language it's a really hard name to pronounce. Well, I'm very happy with the ending AND how you played everything off was perfect(I know I said that before but it was!). You NEVER fail to make a good story better by adding so many plot twists. Just when you think it's over, it's not and it only gets better from there. Point in case, Kagome's turning down his proposal had me seeing red so bad that I cared not that I do not cuss and just had to say what only words fit with my anger. Good job my friend. JEN
| I. LOVE. THIS. STORY. I've followed it since the beginning and it's one of my favorites. You are very talented. Kudos.
Mander B (Chapter 43) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
| Awe. This was cute! Nice read, and you updated all the time. Wonderful
Noacat (Chapter 42) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
Damn you. Made me cry three chapters in a row. I kind of love you for it though...
Adriana (Chapter 42) - Mon 03 Aug 2009
| Awww.. Sesshoumaru's so sweet. :)
update soon.
| I agree with Kagura, they deserve each other. I may have calmed down some like Sessh but I still think she was honestly to blame for this one. After all the months they spent together and she took something this fagile and blew it way out of proportion...on the other hand, I do believe he is at fault for her decision to leave. He has waited way too long to talk about this. He should have at least called and told her he needed a day or two to cool down but he too failed to see this was Kagome and she was a highly explosive and emotional being. He needed to man up and get to some kind of understanding before time made it too unbearable to do anything. Well, whatever happens here I cannot even begin to guess because so much has occurred that it's totally screwed up. You never said there was a happy ending and though we all wish it, sometimes it makes more sense to keep them apart. I guess I'll just wait for the outcome and hope those two emotionally handicapped people can get it straight for once in their life. Love what you're doing with this. So much drama and angst...JEN
| Go, Sess, Go! I hope he can get his act together this time...
| You are so incredibly cruel to our heroes! I love it. And I completely understand why Kagome didn't accept his proposal. He HAS been very passive-aggressive, and running hot and cold with her. Even in his own internal monologue, which she can't hear (thank god), he has been very wishy-washy, even though he is very attracted to her. He's like, "do I really want to marry her?" All that is truly obvious is that he wants to nail her. Even after she was attacked, he didn't spend much time by her side in the hospital. So he hasn't really shown he loves her. Not good enough. Not for MY Kagome.
| God I love your stories but name this last cliff hannger was just pure evil of you. please keep up your fabulous writing.
| Ok now...got to cool down before I say some naughty words...hmmm, oh the hell with it! She's such a JACKASS!!! After everything they have gone through since her attack and she STILL doesn't get it? I wouldn't blame Sesshoumaru if he left her this time. I mean, I know they're both alittle too quick to think the wrong thing but I honestly thought she had gotten that under control. She really needs....oh dang, I don't know what but she needs help. Paul should have kept his big mouth shut and she would have never thought of that when he proposed. Did she honestly believe that Sesshoumaru, of all the people she knows, would use her like that by proposing to her in front of her friends, family and his brother? Damn girl DOESN"T deserve him! What a...ok, I'm going to stop now and help her pray that Sesshoumaru can find it inside himself to react to her tears and gut wrenching sobs that she does love him and that she was confused because of what Paul had said and he seemed so calm over his hearing in front of the board...and now I'm just rambling so I'm going now...she's such a jackass...ok I'm gone... JEN
Adriana (Chapter 39) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
| He's going to ask her to marry him isn't he!?!?!?!?!?!??!! That makes me so HAPPY! :))
update soon
| So, does this mean Sesshoumaru has come to a decision? I have never seen a fic where he has such confusion over whether to marry/mate before. His feelings are so real. I liked the way you portrayed all his thouhts and emotions about this. I wonder if when they have children that his family traits will carry on? JEN
Adriana (Chapter 38) - Sat 01 Aug 2009
| So IS Sesshoumaru going to eventually propose to Kagome?
And what's going to happen to his career?
I LOVE this story, by the way. I REALLY liked the way Sesshoumaru developed and the whole DNA/genetics thing was a pretty cool twist too. :)
Update soon
| Aww, that was sweet! I'm so glad Sess finally made it. The upside to Kagome's misery is that maybe the old kodger Gus said something to bring Sess to his senses.
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