Come on finish this story I wanna know what happens!!!!!!

Hola! Qué pena no volviste a continuar esta historia :(

A mí me cuesta tanto escribir, tengo varias ideas que me gustaría poder poner en letras pero no tengo el talento que vos si tenes, y me pone triste que historias buenas, excelentes como la tuya no estén terminadas.

Se nota la fluidez con la que escribís, debo felicitarte por esa hazaña, porque yo se que no ha de ser algo sencillo y vos lo haces divinamente. ojalá algún día reconsideres y vuelvas a escribir, tal vez tenga suerte pueda leer el final de esto!! Voy a cruzar los dedos! :)

Saludos!

FINISH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!

*please?*

I love this story please update soon! :D

Update this its wonderful         must have more!!!!

I have read this story at least a dozen times... I love it but I am begging.. and pleading.. and I am on my knees... for you to pretty please update soon... I really want to see how this ends.
Hugs with hopes of more chappies..
Alpine ^_^

nice story :DDD  omgomgomg! inupapa's going!

Oh, my gosh, please update soon!

Grrrr, Toga.  Great characterization.  Great enough to make me turn violent toward a made-up character!

I think I've already reviewed this chapter, when I read the story before, but I cannot resist telling you again how poignant I found this chapter in particular.  Great writing, great story.  I'm glad you have given your readers the re-assurance of knowing that there is going to be a happy ending, even if it is in the form of an alternate ending.  While I love angst, it is hard for me to bear, without a happy ending...

I found this story last night and read all 13 chapters... It is really a good story and I hope you update soon.  There are some things that I don't understand... Like if Kagome has been a part of the Inu pack since she was a small child why did Sango need to tell her Inu mating habits?  Why didn't she know about Toga's shame of out living his first mate... and that Sesshomaru was suppose to bring back the honor of the family line by imprinting on a black inu... I mean if Sango knew it... why wouldn't Kagome, a part of the pack, have that information. 

I also agree with a previous response about why Kagome and Sango always seem to have to be sister like.  Also, why would Kagome become a youkai exterminator if she is apart of a youkai pack, and why is her mother so overly involved in getting her to be a youkai exterminator? 

Also, why would Toga think that Sesshomaru imprinted on another female when he knew Sesshomaru had not left his office since Kagome's departure???? and the fact that Sesshomaru had cut her name into his body in his delusions... that makes no sense that he would bring in another female... and since when did Kagome become such an idiot and cruel person that someone that she loves is dying and she tells her adoptive father she has work. 

These are just some of my observations... I think it is strange that she just up and leaves too, without speaking to Sesshomaru about leaving. 

Good story although it needs a bit work on it. It seems as if you forgot some of the things you wrote in your earlier chapters like Kagome already knew Miroku and Sango from her childhood but then you wrote that Kagome met them through her work later and suddenly she is like a sister to Sango? I´ve never understood why so many authors insist on writing Kagome in a sister-like relatinship with Sango, it´s really getting old and cliché-like roles are really boring. At least you did not bring Rin as an adoptive daughter of Sesshoumaru into the story. That is something I can´t read anymore.

As an author you have a vast room to be creative and to play with the characters as you see fit so I will never understand those authors who insist on the roles the characters should have again and again. I´ve never been a big fan of Sango and it always gets on my nerves as to how she is always the "sister" of Kagome. Another point that does not make any sense is how Kagome doesn´t know anything about youkai and had to ask Sango about it. She grew up with a hanyou, was always close to the youkai family, is even pack to them and trained under another miko for four years and you really want to say that she doesn´t know  anything? That only implies that you made Kagome incredible stupid and ignorant. Two things she never was but you managed to portray her so.

What I don´t understand is how Inutaisho and Izayoi think they did the right thing. Sesshoumaru and Kagome has the right to decide what they want to do. They are old enough to make the decisions and it´s not as if they don´t know how Inuyasha as a hanyou grew up. They had to be stupid and blind not to see it. Besides, Kagome is not a weak female like Izayoi.

They simply had no right to stick their nose into something like that. As they say "the path to hell is paved with good intentions" and it would serve Inutaisho right if Sesshoumaru cut him lose from his life.

Hope you can take this as it was meant to be, a critique. I´ve learned that honesty and critique is the best way to improve myself and hope you can see it the same way. And really, if I didn´t like your story I wouldn´t review at all.

Please continue. I totally adore this story and hope to read a new chapter soon!!!

Oh wow its great, I have tears in myeyes!!!!

I must simply say that I love your story. I'm adding it to my favorites. Please update soon! I'd like to see how Kagome and Sesshomaru mend their situation. I feel so bad for Sesshomaru. I mean... Shit. Kagome has her reasons. I'd probably do the same as her BUT as a reader, I want to see some warm moments! :-) Good luck with the story!

Aww, that was just horribly (wonderfully) angsty. Happy ending?

this story is gettin more interestin yet confusin

So Sad please let there be a happy ending!!!!!!

0.o i read the author notes..... you make me sad buy saying i dont read it.... anywho please up date... and let me guess it is kagome isnt it?

I was so happy to see this story updated. It is quite original and I really hope to see more soon. I feel so sorry for both of them. Thanks for the great read

Hugs ^_^