I love this story. It was very well written. I really enjoyed the fact that kagomeis a fanfiction. Also, to have sesshomaru read the stories she writes. Its very interesting. This story is very well put together. I was so addicted I couldn't stop reading it. What awonderful work of art.
Natasha (Chapter 4) - Wed 21 Feb 2018
Best fic ever!
Bloonie (Chapter 4) - Tue 04 Jun 2013
this was a highly enjoyable read and very weill writen.
You guys should so more co-author work :)
God's I love this story, is so well writen has a unique plot Sesshoumaru isnt a woossy, and it actualy makes u think what if's -giggles- oh well thats just my rotten brain and my heart trying to make sense of things that will never be... Anyways moving on wonderful writing unique plot well executed the personalities of the characters i love it the humor made me laugh so much and toga i love toga i wish people would work him into more stories all in all a wonderfully writen FF one that i will add to my favorites to read over and over since i opened a new account my old one got lost -sigh- cant keep track of does password im a scatter brain with ADD rofl anyways back to the topic please keep up the wonderful work and writing of sess/kag FF romance plots i luv them cant get enough thank you again for such a wonderfull storie and..
Ja- Ne : }
Awesome! It was just great and the fact that Inu papa was so meh about the torture of Inuyasha was just too funny
That was an insane revenge plot! Brilliant the way you executed the chapter and the attack of Inuyasha.
It keeps getting better with each chapter. You make it all seem so natural and I cannot wait to see what Kagome has in store for Inuyasha!
I was browsing through your other stories of which I'm a devoted fan to and then I decided to give this one a shot. Its just amazing! Words cannot describe how hilarious it is and what a genius you are! Sesshoumaru getting off to a plagiarized story from Inuyasha is priceless! I can't wait to find out what his reaction is going to be.
Loves_depp (Chapter 2) - Mon 20 Dec 2010
Okay So this story is like really priceless... I think their personalities fit perfectly for the story and I most say I love ya for writting it. I can't wait to finish reading but i had to stop and give you a reveiw ahead of time. I hope that tells you how much i like it.
That was very well written, there are few errors in the text but the point still gets across. The Inuyasha bashing was fun, I'm feeling a bit sorry for him after being subjected to Jakotsu without supervision... =3 I'll have to read this again, it was just that good.
Totally awesome, you two are a force to be reckoned with lol
Angelicatt (Chapter 4) - Sat 14 Nov 2009
love you both...
Alpine (Chapter 4) - Thu 13 Aug 2009
| Supremely wonderful.... Absolutely fantastic... It was golden.. Ok...enough of that.. I really enjoyed your story..
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| I barely read fanfic anymore, not since I started writing, but I had an itch tonight and lemme tell ya, you scratched it superbly. I sat and read the whole thing in one shot, eating without pulling my eyes from the screen among other interesting feats. (I love it when the husband puts the kid to bed.)
Annnnyyyywwwaaaaaayyyyy, I absolutely loved it from start to finish. I especially enjoyed Sesshoumaru making out with his laptop. If I didn't have to go to bed or deal with the consequences of a cranky hubby I think I'd be reading every single fic you've got posted right now. You may have some 'splaining to do to my readers... *grin* Me getting started reading again is a dangerous thing and updates my be a long time coming now!
Oh, and I'm totally with you on the whole plagiarism thing. I had someone copy my first two fics and post them on another site as their own, along with a ton of other people's too, and it was surprisingly psychologically painful, more than I'd expected it to be. I would have loved to tar and feather them! If it ever happens again, I'll just think of Inuyasha's punishment and smile.
| That was one of the more creative stories I've ever read. The torture was pure genius. This was a very fun read :)
| Just wanted to say that I loved this story.
| 9/10 on this story. Very well done.
| OMG Monti this was hilarious, you and Roo did such a great job i couldn't wait to read the next chapter! And i think you got the message across, if you copy someone else's work and mark it as your own, you end up getting a pissed off Kagome going ballistic on your ass!!!LOL
It was short, yet very detailed and you even managed to throw a whole bunch of characters in there as well. Exciting and entertaining without being to much or overly dramatic!! I absolutely loved this!!!
| Very nice! It was an enjoyable read and I thank you two for writing it. Sexy lemons and teasing poor Inu were the icing on the cake :D
Nicely done!
| r0o and Monti can write one hell of a lemon! I want to thank you both for giving us a wonderful and funny story to read. ***Huggles***
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