:Squeel: This chapte was AWESOME!! Great use of the prompt ;) That last sentense made me jump in glee--he kissed her!! xDDD
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Love the updates! I love how Sesshoumaru takes care of Kagome! He is so sweet. I wonder, however, why Kagome doesn't realize that Sesshoumaru is attracted to her because of her period? Isn't that why he has been staring too? Please update soon! I can't wait to see how both Sesshoumaru and Kagome react to the kiss!
Nice ;)
I feel so sad. Does Sesshoumaru really not like Kagome to be around? I thought he enjoyed her company. If he is just trying to keep her safe, does that mean he doesn't care? Please update again soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Cute! And very well-written...
lol. that was great. I can't believe he actually got a turkey.
Sesshoumaru is so sweet! I love that he searched all over so he could find Rin a turkey. What a great guy! I'm just surprised that Kagome knew what Thanksgiving was. Did she learn about it in school? Thanks for the new chapter! I can't wait until Kagome tries to describe Christmas!
::LMAOROF:: I like I love ....oh tears in my eyes soo good you got your token Ne? Great job as always
great job always
hahaha! That was mean. Poor Kagome. XD
I like it overall. In this chapter you have quite a few goofs though, standard words that would make more sense with ing added & the like as well as using prey instead of predator in 1 spot, predators are the critters who hunt & eat the prey critters, like wolves are predators & bunnies are prey.
I love your updates! Kagome was sweet telling Rin about Halloween. I love how Rin tried to keep everyone safe by giving them gifts. Thank goodness Kagome had something to give Rin since she is so precious! Kagome walking through the graveyard was funny. It is amazing how a person can scare themselves. Kagome was hearing normal noises, but in her fear was turning them into ghosts. Sesshoumaru was so cute getting Kagome away from Inuyasha. He should have realized though that with Kikyo there his whole group could have walked right in front of Inuyasha and he wouldn't have even noticed! Great stories! Can't wait to read more!
I loved it, so funny.
Interesting. Wish there was more to explain a little more about what was going on. Keep it up and update soon!!!
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