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dilba (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Jul 2022

You surely have a talent for writing but I don't think the title fits the story. The only chemical reaction took place when Sesshoumaru's saliva came into contact with Kagome's arm cast. You need a plotline and follow it until the end. This was a bit scattered, as if you had put several short fanfictions together. I still liked it a lot.


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Jun 2013

Sorry about the last review. I did not realize the story was complete.


I Love The Stuff I Review (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Jun 2013

MORE PLEASE!!!!


Moonstruck (Chapter 15) - Wed 12 Jun 2013

Nice story, good romance. The parts are all very interesting and all the different themes come together nicely into a cohesive whole.


Angelika (Chapter 15) - Tue 22 Nov 2011

lol nice lol


Kukuro-kunami (Chapter 15) - Fri 11 Jun 2010

love it, especially those 3 inu female's reactions. That made me roll on the ground and laugh my heart out, literally. Please update very soon!! ^_^


GreyEcho (Chapter 13) - Wed 10 Mar 2010

Haha I like her reaction at the end. I'm glad there getting closer. :D


Rowdys girl (Chapter 13) - Fri 05 Mar 2010

Sneaky inu! Kagome needs to purify his butt - just a little! Very good, very funny and very unique take on the common theme. You have a marvelously creative mind and managed to turn out a fresh, delightful tale!

I noticed just a few things - it is so hard to find the errors we, ourselves, make. Imagine my chagrin everytime MLMonty posted a new chapter of our story, Cultural Differences and I would read it and find an error in it. I had the same problem with my two drabbles, as soon as I posted them and read them through, I found errors. Drives me nuts - and I haven't far to go!

On top of everything else, she was [being] beginning to think that Sesshomaru

unless he has proof when accusing a lord or lady of [hire] higher status

Sesshomaru so that you would learn my clan's ways

to avoid anyone in particular [in] any longer

 


Saholia (Chapter 11) - Tue 15 Dec 2009

LMAO! Totally hilariuos! Poor kagome...what she gets herself into...hehe


Lexie (Chapter 11) - Mon 14 Dec 2009

oh and the plot thickens. please update. please!please!please!


autumngold (Chapter 11) - Mon 14 Dec 2009

Why do I find it hilarious that a condom was able to break the silence between Kagome and Sesshoumaru.  It could be in the condom's new ad. . . "Not just for birth control anymore, . . "   Thanks for the update!  Can't wait for your next post!


Starlyte (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Dec 2009

Ok finally caught up!! The flow of this story is awesome, its not rushed, but its not dragging either! I also like how the story still moves along even though its mainly in reply to challenges!! Once again, i loved this and look forward to the next one!!


Starlyte (Chapter 2) - Thu 03 Dec 2009

Ok i just had to review here, i'm still reading the rest and trying to catch up but i just had to say something here!

Firstly, Yay another story from you, you know how much i love your work and sorry i haven't been able to review your other stories, my computer is 'FINALLY' going long enough for me to read and review stories so here goes:

The first chapter; Inuyasha is such an ass, 'his shard detector' can't wait for Kagome or Sesshomaru to put him in his place, that really pissed me off with his lil' comment at the end when Sesshomaru grabbed her.

Second chapter; I am really starting to get into this and its only been two chapters LoL!! Hope Kagome pays attention to what that snake youkai said, cause it looks like things are really going to get interesting now!

Ok so now i've said my peace, sorry it went on for a bit, but now i'm going to read the rest of the chapters that you've done!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Dec 2009

*is totally amused*


Lilla (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Dec 2009

Hi!


I don't think you have right autumngold. It is not about safekeping, but controlling.

She isn't a tool nor a broodmare and she has the rigt to choose the way she lives. About helping her, he choose it as his duty in this war, so why should he complain?

Oh, and hurt his WHAT? Ha ha ha. I'm sorry but we speaking about Sesshoumaru. You could hurt a mountain before...


autumngold (Chapter 10) - Thu 03 Dec 2009

Wow Kagome, way to be grateful!  It's not like Sesshoumaru had just saved her from being raped twice, and tended to her after she was hurt.  He's trying to keep her safe and she explodes.  I hope that she apologizes and tells him why she was upset.  She must have really hurt his feelings.  Please post again soon!


stars (Chapter 9) - Wed 25 Nov 2009

please updata


GreyEcho (Chapter 9) - Wed 25 Nov 2009

GAh it ended there! Nice chapter. Love it!


Saholia (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

I just read the whole thing--awesome woman! Karma for you too!


Debra Timson (Chapter 9) - Tue 24 Nov 2009

I like this! Please update soon! :)


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