Hey ;)

I just finished reading your story (after reading it for five hours straight) and I have to say, I enjoyed it immensely ;)

It's a light, humorous story. The chemistry between the couple is amazing and I absolutely love how you portrayed the both of them!

So I just wanted to thank you, for writing and sharing this incredibly adoreable story!

I laughed my ass off and it made my day :D

I reread a lot. Pay me no mind. I just want to get through it at least once, so I can say I read it and enjoyed it, too. 

-KD

You tense jump. A lot. Grammar is perfect, if you dont count that, story is great so far. I already have a feel for the characters and some background. I'm enjoying all the interactions. I'm being led along happily. It's just that tense jumping is driving me up a wall. You already read it like it's going on right at that moment even though it is in past tense (had, did, hadn't, was) but you switch unnecessarily to present tense (has, does, hasn't, is). It makes sense in the dialog, but it isn't really needed anywhere else. That is my one and only criticism. The story is fantastic.

-KD

-rolling on floor laughing and holding sides- OH MY GOD! That was funny. "Nanny Wanted" must have bags of cookies and rooms made of steel!

Awsome story, Kashi. Thank you.

I love the last chapter it was hilarious

That would be cute! A new series, baby sitter on demand! Love your ending!

I really enjoyed this story! It was funny and also sweet at the end. I think this was a rather interesting idea and it was well writen. I hope you will continue to write!

Gorgeous story, I laughed until i cried, thank you for a wonderful ride! Bravo!

Delightful. A really cute follow up to this hilarious story.

Thank you for writing. It was greatly enjoyed.  

Damn, this story got me hooked before I even finished the first chapter. OMG. I'm so happy that I was able to read it. This story was full of hilarious and quirky scenes and the lemon scenes were to die for! I, of course, thought about writing a review for each chapter, but then, that will be too time-consuming. Plus, you'll have a rough time going at all the reviews, so I decided to write this one review, in hopes that it will suffice. :D I noticed that you mentioned that you will be posting up something later? Well, I'm already looking forward to it. I'm practically on my painted toes, here. Lol.

Awesome story, plot, characters' personalities, chapter length, grammar & punctuation, and need I say more? Haha.

-RubyJeweler

I loved it loved it loved it! thank u!!

:DDDDDDDD

yay i've been waiting for forever. :) i'm glad you are getting back on track, heehee. can't wait for the next chapterrr

Well, it was a loooooooooooong wait, but worth it! I love this chapter! I laughed portions of myanatomy off! I can't wait for the next one. Hope the wait won't be so long.

GREAT CHAPTER!

oy vey! This had me in a fit of giggles and joy. I am sooo happy he has finally come to some semblance of reality. And naughty toga. He is such a perverted old man. But hey its a free babysitter!! lol

YES YES YES AN UPDATE!! I waited so long for this! Started reading this story on FF.net AGES ago and re-read it a few times (each time my heart breaking a little from the lack of update T.T). And FINALLY an update! Sorry I will calm down now *grin*. Computers are annoying like that, glad that everything is sorted now.

So he marked her, wonder what will happen now? Sesshomaru isn't the type to admit that he wasn't right.

Toga is going to be seen chosing baby clothes next ^^ Victory is so close!

Yay!  So glad to see an update!  And things keep on moving :)  So he marked her as.....?  I don't think a mate but maybe as his chosen?  Like engaged?  

It sucks when RL gets in the way...darn computers and their issues.  

Thank you for updating!  Hope to see another sooner than a year :)

Its an interesting start but it's annoying that you keep flipping from past tense to present tense, especially in the middle of a sentence. It is generally past tense all the way through and present tense only in regards to direct thoughts and dialogue. Otherwise, it's frustratingly confusing and causes more pauses and re-reads than actual reading and enjoyment.

So long since your last chapter. PLEASE update soon because I can not wait until your next chapter!