I really wish there was more of this story

I really love your fanfic. I love your character shun. I love how the idea of Sesshomaru being the more dominant/rough and Shun being more gentle. This is a really good Fanfic. I read your "A Kludge of One Shots" before I read this and I love both a lot. I keep coming back to read it over and over again.

Hi,

This is my first time reading on this site and this is only the second time I've ever left a review. I really enjoyed reading your story and I just felt it was only right I tell you. I visiting my sister and I saw your author name in one of her fan fiction notebooks.  She had written such positive notes about your unique storylines,character developments and writing in general, that I just had to check out your story for myself. My sister has worked with many famous authors but she chose to quit after she was abducted and violently attacked at an ATM. We both love Sessh/Kagome FF and she mentioned this site to me over a year ago but I was too busy to check it out. I thought she would be a member of this site but couldn't find a way to sign in to her account.

I don't know if anonymous reviews are allowed but I'll find out after I try to send this one. I'm dying to know if this story will be continued. I know I'm a late comer to your work but I'm excited to read more. I want to find out who is stalking their home and what they are trying to get back. I can't wait to learn what Shun's history is with Billy and Tina,and who was that crazy guy that tried to attack Kagome at the cafe. Is Inuyasha's unstable personality from being such an old hanyou and will he get his memory back? Since Sessh and Shun (being the last youkai of his breed) both mated Kagome,does this mean that she has the ability to birth full youkai in this story?

I don't know if you'll get this review or if you can or will reply to it. If you get this and choose to reply,please send it to: Lara5170@live.com .I'm visiting my sister and this is the main email address to her computer. She doesn't really use the account but it becomes active (or open?) when the computer is online and she said I can use it. I also found out how to get the computer to give an alert sound when an email is sent to this account. I'm going to continue reading more of your work on this site and I'm over 30,so my age shouldn't be a problem. Thank you for writing and posting your work on a public forum,online. I'm grateful for having the opportunity to read it. I hope I have written an appropriate review, as this is only my second time leaving one and I feel awkward about writing it. My sister has always been a firm believer in giving credit to someone when they are deserving of it. I've followed her career,her work and looked up to her all my life. I'm using her computer,in her home and I would never want to embarass her. She's taught me everything,once reading her notes on your work,I knew I had to read it myself. You really are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading more of your work.  

I just found your stories last night & to learn more about the characters I read this story & I'm so upset that you haven't continued writing it since jan of 2010 I really hope you decide to continue it. You left so many unanswered questions & cliffhangers & now I feel so into it I'm dying to find out what happens next...

 I'm dying to read more of it & find out about who tried using the Naraku-like puppets to try to get into the shiro & poke around. & who the guy in the resturant that came after Kagome was & what is or was  Shun's relationship with Billy the guy from the restaurant & why he hid the pictures from Kagome & if Shun's into guys too then why was he so uncomfortable being touched by Sessh??

PLEASE write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG...you have to update this soon...Its not fair....Please....Please....

is Billy a relative to Shun?? I guess they haven't figured out exactly who Kagome is? So now that she's got 2 husbands, is she gonna hypenate her last name or stay Taisho? I think whatever amnesiatic curse is on Yasha is giving him migraines from the mental block...must be painful.

-laughs- oh, you gotta love jakie. he's brilliant!

very good chapter

good on shun for protecting kagome from that creep at the cafe

So, what is the secret history with Shun? another intriguing mystery! So, Kagome is still shy around Shun, probably will be for a while and Inuyasha is being weird. can't wait to see what happens next.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE NOW! ><

A hanyou with amnesia, new mates...an imposter..so much to think about

Now the question is...what caused the amnesia? was it due to the being who used the spell to imitate him using something of his? and how will Kags act while out with Shun when getting to know him? Is she super nervous? Will Shun tell her about his past problems with females? This story is great!

okay, read all 10 chapters in 1 sitting and i have to admit, you are a creative genius! I love this story and I think I know where it is going. So much fun!

This is brilliant, can't believe it's the first time I've read it. Thanks for sharing!

Shun got weirded out by Sess. LOL! What is up with Inu and the amnesia syndrome? That was crazy. There is definitely soemthing wrong here. Shun got visually assaulted by Jak! That was hilarious. Great Job on the chapter lady!

I like this story as well as your Kludge of One Shots. I kind of feel bad for Inuyasha though. I just hope he doesn't go crazy. Maybe he's in need of a mate, not an outlet of sexual frustration, since the girls involved in the regular can't take being with Inuyasha when he's out of control. I wonder who the mysterious youkai is and what he's looking for. And how is it that Miroku and Sango are still alive? Was a pure wish made on the Shikon no Tama? I hope you go more into depth as to how his human side causes him to become abusive. Maybe it's his human side that makes him so unstable. Anyway, can't wait for the next chappie. 

LOL! Shun was about to get a great sleeping pill. Sesh just had to return. and what is this about an undercurrent of abusiveness with Inuyasha? abd from his Mother's side no less? I really want to see how that develops. Could this be the reason why he snaps?

i just have to say!

WOW!!!

this is an awesome story so far.

normally i don't like threesomes BUT i really like shun.

(but then people normally put inuyasha as the third and i just instantly think incest between the brothers LOL)

keep up the good work (Y) it's coming along really well ^_^

can't wait for the 9 am meeting :P

Have I told you how much I am enjoying both "Super Bowl" and "Kludge"?  I really love the universe you have created, and the presence of all my favorites from the anime.  Shun is an awesome original character (and this is from a reader who normally really dislikes original characters).  I am in a great deal of suspense.  You are holding back on InuYasha's attack on Kagome, and I am posititively squirming with anticipation to find out exactly what happened, though you have provided plenty of clues.  I am having SO MUCH FUN reading these stories, they are just great!

Could this be Naraku's reincarnation? Who could this be I wonder? That was an awesome chapter. I think I see why Inuyasha is snapping in your other story. He wanted to be kagome's mate and seeing Shun take her the way he did could have possibly triggered part of his problem maybe? I'm just guessing.