i till love this story your really good at discribing things. going by age and everything is a really good way to start but you might want to stop and go with the story more i understand shes really young and stuff so not much happens to her but can you stop and write alittle more or jump forward a few years.any way love the new chapter its sooo good plz write more soon <3

koool. i like this story so far. and i have seen the movie ultraviolet but its nothing like this. Don't take this the wrong way and this is not a flame butif you want some guidelines as to how the movie goes i could pm you. Anyway the story is really good so please update soon.

This s soo good i love it i have seen the movie UltraViolet its really good to you have to continue with this story its soo good