Ohh, this is GOOD! Please more, more. I am enjoying this storyline. Continue..on.
Jenna (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Aug 2009
Ahhh!! i love it!!! update soooon please!!
and i love the legnth of your chapters..
its perfect:]
stars (Chapter 3) - Sun 09 Aug 2009
please updata
Love your long chapters. I like your use of dialogue and flashbacks, it makes your writings style very colorful and makes the reader feel they are close to the action. Keep up the good work!
I love this type of Sess/Kag story, where Sess is a brutal businessman. Your writing is very engaging, you really know how to draw a reader into your story, and make them care about the characters. Excellent work, I can't wait for more!
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