Whoo hoo! Another great chapter. I love your description of the kissing scene. Spit out those chapters!
lov-ly chapter, for some reason I found the phrase "Sesshoumaru's little heathen" hilarious...even though it's still SO hard to wrap my mind around her acting like a brat, a kid yes..but a brat? O.o ^_^
I'm really loving this story. (especially chapter 8... ^__^') anywaaaay, I find it very unique and creative with you switching up the characterizations. Pleaasse, update soon because this is very enjoyable. :D Oh, and just wondering, why is chapter 9 all in bold?? Just pointing that out.
~Obi
This alternate dimension or whatever it is, is starting to seem like Bizarro Planet in the old Superman comic books. Or maybe "Through the Looking Glass". But you are writing with restraint, and I am enjoying it immensely!
Naraku had a personality transplant! I wonder if he's the "young lord" version (so cute!) or the scary, armored, tentacled Naraku... don't tell, I'm sure I will find out soon enough!
Rin is a little brat! Nice characterization!
You are such an awesome writer, iloveprettysilverhair. This story rocks!
HA! I totally called it lol Or at least that he was giving her clothing. But if you did a good job of making it SEEM naughtly. I didn't read the summary on this story, so at the beginning my mind was kind of being blown but it's kind of interesting. And what's this about a prophecy? hmmmm... fascinating. Cant' wait to read the next chapter XD
First you drag my mind into the gutter and then you yank it out! Now I ask you, is that fair?
All gone? Seriously? Please, please, please, write more soon...
knife moans in happiness. will you marry me, iloveprettysilverhair?
Naraku-kun! Uh Oh. Does that mean Kouga's going to be....
Mmmmmmm. This is sooooo good. Like cake. Chocolate cake. With Sour-Cream Fudge Frosting on it. And Ice Cream!
That was one funny chapter! I wasn't anticipating the changes in Rin and Jaken. Should have seen it coming, but I'm glad I didn't. I laughed my a** off!!!!!!!!!!!
Yes! Yes! Yes! Yes! I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yesssss! (wiggles like a puppy with excitement)
Now, how did I miss this fanfic before? Maybe I was saving it, for a special treat!
ILOVEiloveprettysilverhair! Such an awesome fanfic author, and I can tell this story will live up to past stories!
OH MY GOD! That was hilarious!
"Go on touch it! You know you want to!"
"It's too big! It won't fit!"
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
I never thought I say this but...poor Naraku!
^_^
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