Great job! I loved it and how they finally got back together. ^.^
Hilarious chapter! Great characterizations of Rin and Shippou. I enjoy reading about a naughty, selfish Rin, and your version of Shippou reveals such a deceitful and malicious take on what a young fox demon would be like. I find him very disturbing! Sort of Pet Semetary-like, in a way. I think both "youngsters" come across as very believable. Anyone who thinks kids are all cute and sweet don't know kids very well! And Naraku and Sesshomaru are such GUYS in this fic. They make such believable "buds". So endearing!
Oh, I love you, Iloveprettysilverhair! It seems impossible that I have missed so many new chapters of this awesome, funny, and sweet story, but now I get the treat of reading several chapters at one time, so there is a definite upside!
The story was amazing and I enjoyed it.
Lumi (Chapter 27) - Sat 04 Aug 2012
What a great ending! I wasn't sure how you could pull off them being together without it being awkward somehow, but you did it. I applaud your plot-prowess.
Awww... what a great way to close it out. I love how confussed Sesshoumaru was. (and who blames him?) Great story!
^___^ I Love this story so much! I was so happy to read the last chapter. You did a great job. This is definitely a story I will come back and reread over and over.
Loveyaa (Chapter 26) - Thu 02 Aug 2012
Hmm...strange. Wonder what will happen when she goes back to the past that she is familar with. A combined Sesshoumaru that loves her maybe (?!). I can't wait to see what happens next :)
This story is so awesome! Please update soon!
OMG! Did you just leave us hanging, AGAIN??? And, this chapter was so short...:( So wrong... Plz, plz, plz, update again soon!!
Pricila (Chapter 26) - Sat 28 Jul 2012
Ohhhhh, I wonder what happens now. Is it really a dream? Did she just bump her head and dream a month away just to wake up and find she's been out for fifteen minutes? And if it is not a dream what happen to Sessh has he been put in her fudel era past and merging with the real Sessh to become the knew Sessh? So many questions!! Can't wait till the next update!
O_o Tell me she won't believe it's a dream. >.< I want to see what happens when she goes back. lol can't wait.
But you didn't tell us what happened to Sesshoumaru!!!! Please tell me you'll be updating again tonight, please!!!!!
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