| That was just wow. I'm mean wow. *blinks incredulously* I've read fics where Inuyasha was clueless before but THAT just takes the cake and you did it so well. I can't wait for more.
Calix (Chapter 6) - Wed 24 Jun 2009
| I was laughing hytericaly as I read this. Sess as a girl I know my husband calls him the Maybalene girl but thats just beinmg nASTY. Wow Inu ius dense.
| lmao i love this! i cant tell you how much amusement i get out of reading this. its just hilarious, i like how at the end he's all like "She may not like helping him solve her; however, she loved helping him solve other puzzles." and how Kags is all like, its mine! raRr! i wonder though, does this mean you gunna go through the full manga, and have her come back three years later? hahahahaha i can't wait! - r0o
Dandie (Chapter 6) - Mon 22 Jun 2009
| Haha! Awesome. Very funny chapter! Loved it.
Cindy (Chapter 6) - Mon 22 Jun 2009
| I didn't think anything could be as dense and clueless as Inuyasha is acting. Sesshoumaru may be right, he is totally brain damaged. :-) Thanks!
Dani (Chapter 6) - Mon 22 Jun 2009
| So I'm thinking that even if Inu saw them going at it he would still think it was a strap on. So that means that Kagome needs to be impregnated to show Inu what Sess can really do. Haha, I would look forward to that very much.
Oh, and thanks for the mention. That made my day.
loveless (Chapter 5) - Sat 20 Jun 2009
Wow! That was really interesting. I can't wait for more. Please update soon. Got to have MORE.
Dani (Chapter 5) - Fri 19 Jun 2009
Yes, indeed, Inuyasha should watch them. I think I would like that. Anyways great chappie and i'm looking forward to the next one.
Fairqueen (Chapter 5) - Fri 19 Jun 2009
lol this story gets better every chapter. Funny,yes very funny a puzzle, mother puzzle and throwing a *rock* hehe just wonderful keep up the good work
"Yes, a boulder to the head would indeed be a wonderful punishment. He searched the woods for one of a big enough size. He found it within a few moments. It was gigantic, not only would it knock out the idiot, it would also be hard for him to remove it. He was practically in love with is malicious idea. Picking the rock up he took it back to the outskirts of their encampment, and chucked the rock at the half-breed. It knocked him forward, and squished him"
"She finally made it back, only to be confronted with a talking boulder."
"His puzzle was proud to be owned, and he was glad. "
"He had no interest in baby puzzles, at least not until he had solved the mother puzzle."
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^that made me cry with laughter thank you hahahahahahahahahahahaha baby puzzles hahahahaha
lmao: 'Oh so now she decides to be a good puzzle?' hahahahhahahahhahaha i really like tis story! more please *gives you big puppy eyes*
lol ThAT WAS PERFECT! I love it. Inuyasha think she loves women and that Sesshoumau is a girl. *claps* nice job.
two hearts (Chapter 3) - Tue 16 Jun 2009
I like what you have done so far. Keep up the good work. Please update soon.
this is amusing! i love that last bit "Any good puzzle would remain out of trouble. So as to help the owner discover its meaning. Kagome was apparently not a very good puzzle. She didn't get solved easily, nor did she stay out of danger. Suddenly Sesshoumaru wasn't sure if he enjoyed Kagome being his puzzle, he had to solve" hahahahaha
| I like it! I'm curious to see what will happen next.
| This looks like it's going to be a really interesting story! You have a great idea. I can't wait to read more.
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