this is really good liz :) keep it up!

love-V-S

Hey I just have to say wow... I mean I know you told me basic ideas but I never imagined you go into this much detail. So now you have to vow that you will not turn this into an imcompleted work. You must promise to see it through to the end.

This is coming along beautifully... thankfully you are not a guy so all these compliments will not give you an overly large ego. LOL. But seriously your doing an amazing job with this story.

This is so... fascinating. I mean it is one thing to plan it out but another to actually read it. I love it so far.

I am sorry I didn't review to this earlier. I actually read it the day you posted it. Anyway, I think you did a fantastic job with Ichiro and Sakura. The chocolate was a laugh (actually reminds me of ... well me. I can't eat too much either. Angel can *tear* but I am getting off topic) I love your story so much and I wait with as much patience as possible for updates.

Well since I've already read this I figured it's only fair to leave you a review. I am happy that you take my advice so well... I have beta for one guy who thought I was cruel because I was nit picking his work. Anyway... can't wait to help you with more.

Ah!!!! The torture of having to wait....... please save me! (which means a cookie to help you work faster on the next chapter)

Girl you did a great job with summarizing Kagome's thoughts, this is a perfect way to get the ball rolling on this plot line.