oh man there should so be more to this! of course i haven't looked yet to see if there is or not. loved it!!!!!!!!

wow he would be sore normally its the guy stating that anyways keep up the great work i hope to read more soon ^_^

IT TOOK A RUMOR........

Not a fan of this one, though it might have gone better if it was chapters instead of a one-shot.  Seemed too rushed to me, use of the word 'sexy' was way overdone, the flow was a bit off (too much she did this, he did that).  I think if you work at this one a bit it could become a decent enough one-shot but as it stands now, it needs a bit of work.

(while simultaneously putting the photo back onto her desk)... I don't think that particular phrase needs parentheses.

I very very much enjoyed the beginning. Kagome seemed to be very into her work, passionately so. It was when she and Sesshoumaru exhchanged words that left me feeling she dropped her photo-passion in favor of Sesshoumaru-passion. Now that may be very well and all, however the picture I saw painted in the beginning led me to believe that not even hot Sesshoumaru could distract her from her worries of work. Though that is only my thought.

Also, I am uncertain as to how Kagome's mother acquired her car? Didn't Kagome drive it into work? And then wouldn't that mean that Kagome's mother have to somehow get to her work to take the car? I apologize, but her mother taking Kagome's car does not make sense to me and baffles me only slightly. Though, I do understand it is for plot's sake.

I do enjoy how Sesshoumaru caught whiff of the gosip and he wasn't going to let her get away. It was very pleasing to my senses.

The park incident was humorous in that the two got caught. However, I feel as if they both rushed into it. Though, I do understand how lust and longing overtake common sense every once in a while. But I still could not help but feel as if they were still teenagers and Sesshoumaru was taking Kagome out to a make-out point of some sort.

Overall, it was an enjoyable story. Your writing is neat and readable. I have only few problems following the plot, though I believe it is mostly just me and my time of the month. If I was in a better frame of mind, I believe I would have been kinder. Please pardon me. Thank you for sharing your work.

Wow. That was ... hot. XD Definitely a good PWP story, though Kagome did seem a touch OOC to me. You can probably get away with that a little bit as it is PWP, but just watch how far you take it. 

I think there was only one sentence that threw me for a loop: "Sesshoumaru groaned as she growled and bit harder." It makes it sound like Kagome's doing the biting, when I'm pretty sure you meant Sesshoumaru. 'Course, English is a tricksy, tricksy Baggins, so just remember to keep a close eye out for that sort of thing when you edit. Try reading aloud -- often you'll catch things that you'd otherwise miss by doing that. 

Otherwise your grasp of grammar and spelling seemed excellent (hurrah!), so keep up the good work. 

Thanks for sharing, that was a great way to start the morning. ;)

Nefret. 

Uhh... wow.

That was pretty good. I like the way you started it. I think the first few lines might have been a little irrelevant in regards to the story, but otherwise it was good. It's well written, the story has a basic plot, but I think it might have been a little too rushed towards the end, there. By the way, I wanna meet his lizard, too. XD

I liked this actually very much. It moved a little fast and i got a little confused but i liked it just the same. I liked your kagome though she might have been a littl ooc for some people. I liked it. Great Job!