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Kitsune Diva (Chapter 14) - Mon 12 Mar 2018

I love your story. The plot is pretty good. Kagome is written well as a vinerable teen and Sesshomaru is a pretty interesting rich guy. I look forward to reading more.


sarah duffy (Chapter 14) - Wed 04 May 2011

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing.


Brittany (Chapter 14) - Sun 17 Apr 2011

This is a awesome story. Please write more. I really can't wait to see what happens next. Please update as soon as you can!:)


crin_fausta (Chapter 14) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

This is a really interesting story but please be very careful because Sesshoumaru it's a little OOC...try to explain somehow the pull/Sesshoumaru's attraction towards Kagome and how he come to be so sociable with humans...itherwise this story is not very credible...

Can't wait to read the next chapter!


SesshyGal (Chapter 14) - Fri 01 Oct 2010

hello i love your story and i ask that you heray and put the next chapter up please. your a realy good writer and i have enjoyed reading this story so far. Thanks~fangirl


Makaelynne Smith (Chapter 14) - Fri 10 Sep 2010

i love your story! is this only 14 chapters or is there still more to come?


Kohana_Moon (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2009
Thank god!! I was really worried that it would turn into one of those fics where she just continued to make dumb choices! BUT its not! You captured the thoughts of an abused women beautifully as they always try to rationalize why and blame themselves. Nicely done! Women blame themselves and chidren protect their abusers hoping that if they make them happy it will stop. I like the fact that Kagome swollowed her pride for the sae of her child! It shows her character is maturing! I can't wait to read more! oh and fetus doesn't have an "o" in it.....just a typo a noticed:)

knifethrower (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2009
This story is so full of emotion, I hope at last Kagome will give Sess a chance. He is so awesome in this story... I am really enjoying reading each chapter, and hope you can update again VERY soon...

katie (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2009
wow i like it please keep going its geting very good i want to know whats going to happen to them now

InuAngel (Chapter 14) - Wed 27 May 2009
Thank God she's come to her senses and leaving and letting someone help her. I went through that with my ex-husband, for a year during that year I got pregnant that didn't stop him, the thought of losing my baby or and my baby surviving and having to live with a father that beats her mommy and may one day come after her was enough for me to let go of my embarrassment of my situation, and financial security and get the hell out. I was broke four months pregnant and newly diagnoised with a terminal blood disease I walked out with what money I took from his wallet and the account and didn't look back. He did try to find me, he found me once and learned that I was not the same nieve little high school girl he married and never tried to find us again. Several years later four, my baby is happy healthy and alive. I'm alive, happy as well. I'm not gonna say it's easy and simple it's not, it takes guts and determination and courage. I did love him very much, but I love my child and myself more. I deserved better so did my child what is the point of loving someone who just wants to hurt you? If someone loves you they want the best for you. It wasn't easy I had nothing but a hundrend and twenty dollars and my unborn baby, myself respect and life. I struggled financially had to lower my pride and ask churches, any other financial foundation or food pantry for help, it was a bit demeaning but my baby came first. I have not gotten over what I had endured and can't bring myself to date yet I know one day I will. You can't stop a man from beating you but you better get out the first opportunity that comes to you, it gets worse and worse, there is nothing you can do to change him. Ladies drop the illusion that you can change a man, you can't only yourself. I lost sight in my left eye and may lose it completely from my last bout with my ex I could have lost a lot more. My disease made it more complicated, I have to recieve blood transfussions often to keep us both alive, (she's a miracle baby), It's scarry, it's embarassing and they love to make you feel that you deserve their beating, it's all bullshit, it's to boost their egos and to control you and your life. Ladies listen to our wise author, get away! It's not easy but it can be done and you will be better for it. Stop with the But I love him, love him from afar, a safe distance if you must but you need to love yourself first. Hell no you don't deserve it, no it's not your fault, you can not change another person you can only change yourself for yourself. You can do it, you don't deserve it, you are a human being not some guys punching bag. Sorry, just some memories brough up and thought I could use them in a possitive fashion and share my story in hopes to help someone who is going through this righ now and tell them they are not alone. EXCELLENT story! Good for Kagome, I can't wait till she learns who his half brother is and how that turns out. With Sessy's honor and pride he will be totally pissed with Inu's lack of responsibility and once again marring the family name. This is gonna get good. Oh Yeah and Narku! Fist will fly! Excellent! Can't wait for more. Write on! much Love InuAngel

marga (Chapter 13) - Tue 26 May 2009

so cool! i love it when kagome's the damsel in distress and sesshoumaru will be the hero...! ^^, keep up the good work! ^^,


katie (Chapter 13) - Mon 25 May 2009
wow i like it please keep going

InuAngel (Chapter 12) - Mon 25 May 2009
OMG! Is gonna lose her baby? Is Sessy gonna have her phone tracked and come for her? He's not dumb he knows she's in some sort of trouble the moment they met. This is really great!! I can't wait for more. This is a great B-day present for me, you updated on my B-day thanks for the gift of a new chapter can't wait for more. You are creating an awesome story!!!! I just wish the chapters were longer and I get more into it, not that I'm not into it, excellent!!!! Your Sessy is H.O.T, it's his attitude and his certainty(sp) in his phrases and voice his confidence that he is right without a doubt. Awesome!! OMG! It just dawned on me, Narku is coming to his home!!!! Will he smell Kagome? Will he find out that she is working for him? Willl he have rescued her and taken her away by the time they meet for dinner? Narku will be pissed if he did manage to sneak her away and she showed at the dinner table when he got there never knowing she was gone in the first place. ARRRRGGGGGHHHHHH! I can't wait for more!!! Until then Write on! Much love InuAngel

Kohana_Moon (Chapter 13) - Mon 25 May 2009
Seriously! She wont except help but will be beaten for her child. Does she not think of her child at all or the idea that he could cause her to loose it? It unrealistic that a pregnant women would alow themselves to be abused in any manner at the risk of their child. I mean there are dead-beat mothers that harm themselves and don't care, but Kagome cares doesn't she? I mean thats why she didn't get the abortion? I like you story its just confusing a little. But thats me because of my psych background. Keep writting I can't wait to read more.

katie (Chapter 12) - Sun 24 May 2009
wow that was great keep up the good work and do not give up

InuAngel (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 May 2009
I'm hooked! That's all I can say is I'm hooked, I can't wait for her to call Sessy. Write on! Your great! Much Love InuAngel

shy (Chapter 11) - Sat 23 May 2009
I LOVE THE STORY SO FAR AND I WOULD LOVE IT IF YOU WROTE MORE....I CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER FOR THET STORY.

babyfairy (Chapter 11) - Fri 22 May 2009
I really love this story. I wish you would update faster but i'm just impatient. Anyway good story and i bet that naraku is going to do something very bad to kags. If so please make sesshy kick his butt! Thanks

katie (Chapter 11) - Fri 22 May 2009
wow i like it please keep going u are doing a great job

Mutnodjmet (Chapter 10) - Thu 21 May 2009
Nice chapter. It seems that Kags is going to have to learn the hard way about pride. She being pregnant does not give one room to let pride stand in the way. It does not mean she has to let go of her pride but know when not to let it get in the way in order to survive. She is going to have to accept help however and whenever it's presented all for the sake of her child. Update soon. *hugs and smiles*

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