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Excellent story.  Well-written and very descriptive. I definitely could feel the angst and heartbreak. I like how you left it open ended. I also could see where you could continue it, possibly into a cannon S/K. I would really like to read more of you work.

I love the story-teller way that you ended this fic, as if the true ending was left up in the air and we could decide for ourselves what happened in the end.  You did a wonderful job of providing enough background information about Kag and Sess, and your descriptive details had me feeling their despair when they were separated.  Very good job.

It was truly heartbreaking...the story of true love and true heartbreak. I totally understand why Sess would seem to be so OOC with Kagome - love has a tendency to do strange things to the beings it affects. It would have easier to read if the font was bigger and it totally didn't even need the song lyrics...you could have added it at the end like a swan song before the fade out.

Great job!!

Wow, this was really good! I really can't find any kind of fault in it, except to say that you didn't need the lyrics. I guess I say this for all songfics, as they are not my favorite things on earth. Anyways, I thought the characterization of everyone was really good. I really can't think of a single thing other than the song that was not great in this story - except for the font size. I don't know why every once in awhile I see a story like this, but if you do know, maybe you will want to change the size.

I hope to read more from you soon!

Wow.  That was so beautiful.  I have very few criticisms.  Y’know the usual grammar/spelling/awk. sentences… But the overall flow and plot of this oneshot is so good.  My favorite part was the ending because you left it up in the air.  Anything could have happened.  It leaves the reader feeling bittersweet. 

For me, I thought it was a lot like Angel Sanctuary by Kaori Yuki (great manga/anime if you haven’t seen it).  Angel Sanctuary is kinda hard to explain (just in case you don’t know what it is) but the general plot is one of forbidden love.  Plus angels.  ^__^  And Demons!! ^__^;;  The characterization was so perfect.  Kagome being the angel of purity and sessh being the angel of war.  I was like, “squee!!” 

I appreciated you writing this.  It was great!

ducky out!

Overall good, very lyrically written.  Sesshoumaru seemed a bit ooc but undoubtedly he would be softer and more emotional with Kagome considering their relationship.  The poem or lyrics that were inserted between paragraphs were a little distracting, to me.  I think it would work better if they were written at the beginning or end of the story.  I also would change the font size you used I kept increasing it just to be able to read it.  I actually couldn't get it large enough to read comfortably.

Good job on writting a  sad story but giving readers hope that it might have worked out in the end.  

Wow, just wow.  You did an amazing job with the details and discriptions in this story.  Everything was easy to imagine, you could easily feel their emotions.  It is strange for me to say this, as I can not stand stories where she is an angel, you did an amazing job with that, having them both start off as angels worked really well.  And I would love to see you turn this into a longer story, perhaps telling more about the possible futures you listed at the end. 

Just a couple of things to point out, try not to use caps to emphaize something, it distracts the reader from the story.  Also I would stay away from nicknames such as Sesshou.  And you really don't need the lyrics, you did such an amazing job telling this story that they are just distracting away from your great work.  I hope to see more from you in the future and good luck.

i must say that was a wonderfuly touching story, and you did a wonderful job writing it i loved the way it was told like an old folktale:D, however i belive your story would flow so much better if you took out/moved the song lyrics...your story stands very easily on its own, and the lyrics just break up the flow...i loved this story and i hope you keep up the good work:D