Poor Sesshoumaru. He must have felt that his father's actions towards his mother was his fault. I hope that Sesshoumaru and Kagome's baby doesn't change him. Hopefully he will still love and care for Kagome as much as he does now. Thanks for the new updates!
katlady (Chapter 14) - Tue 17 Nov 2009
:Lol: ink...sesshoumaru LOL you made laugh again and again you got me hooked
please update soon
| This is a fabulous story. Please keep updating!
| Beautiful chapter. Actually pulled a tear from my eyes.
| Hehehe, I love challenges. Very well done and truly enjoyed reading each and every one. Last one. Brilliant!!! Bravo!
Saholia (Chapter 10) - Sun 30 Aug 2009
| LMAO--that was great! That's so like a guy though...hahaha. Glad your computer is all fixed ^.^
| oh sesshoumaru...so stiff...so in character! Karma for the interpretation of this prompt, without using a fairy tale. Your token has been delivered!
| omg, this is such an outstanding piece. I'm floored by it. Double karma for you and your token has been delivered!
Saholia (Chapter 7) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| I like the title of the chapter, its suiting. I was wondering when he was going to make up his mind and ask her....I'm such a hopeless romantic...lol. Keep it up! I'm loving this series!! :)
Saholia (Chapter 5) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| LMAO! Who would of thought....Rin- a little trickster. Was that Shippou in the water?
Saholia (Chapter 4) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| Hmmm...I see a bit of foreshadowing with that last sentence. I love it when Kagome teaches Sesshomaru a few things...it seems so realistic to me.
Saholia (Chapter 3) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| The dream sequence is so well written! I can see it as if it was a movie or something. And Sesshomaru's taking her with him? Awesome! :)
Saholia (Chapter 2) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| Aww--Sesshomaru can be such a softy sometimes...lol
Saholia (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Jul 2009
| Wow--this is so well written! I love how you portray Sesshomaru...Is Kagome a cheerleader?
| Sesshoumaru is having Kagome learn his family history, eh? Hmm... Could he be preparing her for, oh, I don't know... the role as his future mate? (Yes, I do have a one-track mind...) By the way, I love how touchy Sesshoumaru is over the subject of Kenjiro. lol. Hilarious! Great job.^_^
| Poor Kagome, first her clothes get stolen and then she was almost scared to death... That was Shippou in the water, wasn't it? lol. And what the heck, Sesshoumaru? "Your less than average body matters not to this Sesshomaru." That's no way to get a mate! But I suppose giving her his haori made up for the (untruthful) remark. *Grins* Good job!^_^
ooooooooooooooh Rin is being a little sneak! Love it!
"There are plenty out there who seek you, depend on you, and need you." You're one of them, right, Sesshoumaru? *Grins* I loved the subtle concern he had for her safety when he told her not to let her guard down if she senses something nearby. He was telling her to be careful without actually saying the words. *Dreamy smile* It's cute that he kind of admitted that he appreciated her more than Inuyasha. The silent promise in "The hanyou treats you less than what you deserve," to treat her better really had my heart singing! *Smiles* I'm sorry I didn't comment on previous chapters, but I loved them all just as much! I'm looking forward to your next response to a challenge. Keep up the good work!^_^
Janie (Chapter 4) - Fri 05 Jun 2009
| wow! i loved all of the chapters! you are very good! i look forward to next week's challenge. ^____^
three cheers for Tenseiga! wonderful piece and bonus karma for use of a cowboy's hat, and your token has been delivered!
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