I liked this chapter, it was like they were almost getting somewhere, than she pulled away! Sesshomaru is pushing her, but i think if he backed off she'll start to think that he's not interested again, or she's done something else. Also i like how even though Kagome has said that she won't divorce him, sometimes it sounds like she doesn't want to keep at the marriage!
It's all still very up in the air and your not sure where this is going to go, cause there's two possibilities, but i think thats what keeps everything interesting, and that's what makes this great!
It almost got a bit hot and heavy at the end there, but i'm glad she left, cause it difinitely would be too soon, she hasn't even decided if she's going to forgive him!
Great work, can't wait for the next one!!
| I am conflicted with this chapter. I am always happy to see Sesshoumaru and Kagome interaction but I feel like Sesshoumaru is pushing. :( Kagome is so confused right now, and has every right to be! I think he needs to back up a bit. The bedroom incident was greatly entertaining. :)
As always love the chapter cannot wait for more!
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3 things!
1 Amazing chapter, Sesshoumaru is crafty, and manipulating (which is not good he should be called out on it!). Kagome is still persistent in refusing his advances, I have to say I enjoy that the most. She's not being whining she is just nonchalantly telling him 'no sir try harder.'
2 I saw that this story had 19 chapters on FF.net but I held myself from reading it! Well I will admit I had a final to study for after discovering it. I did not read it! I am enjoying the suspense in a sick loving torture way! I wonder is it complete on FF.net? Oh so tempting.
3 I love your review you left for my story! Thank you so much! I do try my best to ensure I have correct English terms, and yes English is a difficult language to master. I have been learning/speaking English since I was 10 and even at 22 I still have difficulties mastering it, but it only makes me try harder. I feel honored that you enjoy my story, I thank you whole heartedly!
:)
pauly (Chapter 3) - Wed 13 May 2009
AWESOME WORK!!!!!
Ooh Ooh Ooh i wanna read the next one chapter sooooo badly! This was really good by the way, in case you didn't get that!LOL
As the previous chapters well written and structured. I also enjoy that Kagome does not just leap in his arms and forgive him, forgivness of such a crime against their loved one takes tame. :D
I love to see the progression of Sesshoumaru's attempt to get Kagome's forgiveness and willingness to continue in their relationship.
Wonderful job, cannot wait for more.
I must also say that I enjoy your diligent updates.
1Bluefire (Chapter 1) - Tue 12 May 2009
I love the story. I just hope she dosen't give in easly. If it were real life she would need a lot of time and him pushing her to see it his was would piss off any self respecting woman.
Sorry my last review was for chapter 2!
He is really trying to fix things between them, i do see that, but i'm glad that Kagome isn't making things easy for him!LOL I can't wait to see where he takes her, and i like how she unpacked her things trying to get one step ahead of him, but ya know it didn't work out that way!Hahaha
Great work on this chapter, loved it!
| It's kind of fun reading this over, one chapter at a time. It's one of those stories that is well worth reading twice. Awesome story, awesome progression in this chapter. Loving it!
| Glad to see you posting this on Dokuga, I've been enjoying it on ff.net, it's awesome!
I am looking forward to the vacation destination that he has picked out. I wonder how long it will take for Kagome to forgive Sess... what if it does take forever? What will Inuyasha say when he sees Kagome in her present state? I wonder what Kagome will say when she hears Sess's explanation for treating her soo poorly? I picture her saying "what if Inuyasha never told you of my condition? Would you still have let me waste away? What would you do if I can never forgive all the wrongs you have committed against me?" I would really like to know how Sess would respond to such a statement. Will she ever forgive Inuyasha for that matter?
Wow! This has been an amazing first chappie. I have never encountered a fic plot that involved cancer and two brothers that were both in the wrong. You had me teary-eyed through the whole chappie. I wonder if both Sess and Inuyasha will be man enough to just be straight forward with Kagome about their reasons for not trusting/loving her the way she should be trusted/loved. Did her family know of her condition? Why hadn't Kagome told Sess? Did she want to wait til after they got married before doing so? Please keep up the good work and update really soon because I really want to find out if Sess will ever gain back her trust again :P
sunset in love (Chapter 1) - Mon 11 May 2009
uh oh, i've read it and now i can't wait for the next installation, i often wonder how would it be if things were as you have laid out, sesshoumaru, tormented with guilt over his poor treatment to kagome despite his undying love and upon learning the true betrayer will do whatever it takes to win her back, while kag has become too cold and indifference to react to these proclamation... and too scpetic to ever have faith again, ah, perhaps you will throw in few more plot, a new sickness that will have kag a new physician who coincidently is... say kouga? just a thought there... anyway, you have wrote it beautifully, and really loking forward for the next chapter
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