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TKE (Chapter 79) - Fri 22 Jun 2012

I absolutely love this story!!!! Its going into my favorites....awesome job!!!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 79) - Wed 20 Jun 2012

I'm finally leaving a review after reading this story years ago, the story was awesome and had a wonderful ending.


wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Mon 05 Sep 2011

This is one of the best fics I have ever read!  I don't say this lightly either.  There is just one other author who has garnered this comment from me.  Truyly this was an AWESOME fic!  The story line had me crying, then it was full of suspense, it was brilliant!

Congratulations and keep it coming...well, another fic that is.

 

 


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 79) - Tue 30 Aug 2011

This was a most excellent fic and judging how many chapters there were you really poured your soul into this and it shows so much. It was an honor and pleasure to read and I have spent the last 8  hours reading it nonstop until my eyes were blurry...it was just that addicting. Thanks for the great read and wonderful journey.

 

SP


chellshocked (Chapter 79) - Sun 21 Aug 2011

Tana (Chapter 10) - Mon 25 Jul 2011

Good things first! I really thought the plot was interesting and wanted to see where this story went, but unfortunately I'm stopping here although I have skimmed through the last 2 chapters to see the ending. There are a few things that just prevented me from really getting into the story how I wanted to. In the beginning, it's said quite a few times that Kagome had cancer, but really she didn't. A benign tumor/growth is not cancer. Not to mention she would have underwent more than just surgery, i.e. chemo. Plus, any doctor that thought to take a scalpel and put it up my lady parts wouldn't make it within 10 ft of me. They wouldn't have got in through her vagina, they'd have gone through her abdomen. Sesshy is also annoying the hell out of me. I know if my fiance did that crap to me, he'd better damn well give up the bedroom on the island and not try to weasel me into sharing a bath or bed with him! One last thing, I know it's your style of writing, but I just couldn't get past the short, halting sentences and switching tenses:  "And Inuyasha had shown her the truth. She didn't really blame him. Even human men wanted children. But if he had really loved her, it wouldn't have mattered. Children can be adopted. There are even demons who are willing to serve as surrogates if the child just had to be of his blood. There were ways." 

Please don't get me wrong, this is not intended as a flame, just as insight to help you as a writer grow. I'm so happy others have loved this story, because as I said, it had a really great plot and tons of promise. I just personally couldn't get into it regardless of how hard I tried and for that I apologize. Keep writing and good luck! 


Lady Lyris (Chapter 79) - Fri 08 Jul 2011

This is by far one of the most longest stories I have ever read in a very long time; and one of the most interesting. I can't believe how long you stretched a modern story out so long. I've read almost 25 chapters at best, and the chapters were short. Your chapters, however, were very long and interesting. There were a few twists in the plot that I didn't expect either, and that kept me reading. Have you ever considered writing your own novels? It took me four days to read this whole fanfiction; I felt like I was living at my computer chair. 

This story was great, and I hope to be reading more of your wonderful creations in the future. :) 

 


Mizuko Takayama (Chapter 79) - Thu 30 Jun 2011

What a wonderful story! A lot of the time if I read a story even close to this long I loose intrest or I feel it's been dragged on but this was fantastic! Thank you for sharing it!

Have a great week!

~~Mizuko~~


Avy (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Jun 2011

Beautiful story!  I read the first chapter the day you put it out and wasn't really intrigued.  Then I got caught up on the last 78 chapters (took me 3 days!)  Wow!  Very entertaining!  Sad it's over, but knew it had to end some time.


His Lady (Chapter 79) - Wed 29 Jun 2011

this was a really good story you did a wonderful job on this i would say i hope you do a sequel but that is up to you but as i said this was a great story and i loved every bit of it =D


Hoshinofuru (Chapter 79) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

Great ending, love the connection between Kagome thinking Sess dosen't know how to have fun and the last line where you see the idea of Sess fun, loved your work, hope to read more!


dayna (Chapter 79) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

Great Story!!! I throughly enjoyed every minute of it!!!!


1CarinoInu (Chapter 79) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

And so it comes to an end.  This was a fantastic story and I'm so sad to see it come to an end.  But all good things must come to an end.  

I hope to see you write more of this pairing in the near future.


randomfan17 (Chapter 79) - Sun 26 Jun 2011

His idea of fun is a little off but good for his personality i guess, lol. Sad now, this was an awesome story and it's over, crying, I lvoed it, please keep writing, i know i'd read it! Thanks for writing this and finishing it, i loved it to death.


TruGemini (Chapter 79) - Sat 25 Jun 2011

So it finally comes to an end....and a beautiful end as well. Thank you for such a delightful, refreshing, love story. I can't wait for your next work!


Diane (Chapter 79) - Sat 25 Jun 2011

Really going to miss this. I have it saved to CD & blank documents waiting for new chapters up to 100, so I'll have to delete those. I guess I'll just have to wait for your next project or re-read this yet again.


Secret Wings (Chapter 79) - Sat 25 Jun 2011

OMG OMG Finally an update!! I've been lurking around here to see the next chaoter!! You really made my day, uhm night. Thanks you so much!!!

I love this story. It's really great!! Everything is here, love, drama, action, family, romance and more!! Perfect fanfiction!! I can't wait to read how Kagome will persuade Sess!! and meet their daughter!!!

I hope you'll update soon!!! Thanks, many many thanks for updating.


L-desu (Chapter 78) - Fri 29 Apr 2011

/dies laughing from the last lines.


kathryn (Chapter 78) - Mon 18 Apr 2011

it took me 3 days to read the story up to this point but i really enjoyed it look forward to more


randomfan17 (Chapter 78) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

I wonder if he's mad at all that Kagome kissed him or if he's madder at her for putting herself in danger. it was funny he threatened to shove it up his ass so far it became a permanent part of his anatom though, i guess he hasn't really threatened bodily harm in a whiile, lol.


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