Not too bad, though I can't see Sesshoumaru entering into a bet when he doesn't understand what his punishment would be had he lost. Grant it he probably wouldn't ever see himself losing but he would still want to be informed, imo. But could probably turn this into a cute little 2 or 3 shot. One for him losing the bet and one for the wax job.
I very much enjoyed this short piece. It was loving and humorous. Thank you for sharing.
Though I am particularly curious as to what bet Sesshoumaru could possibly lose at.
Nefret (Chapter 1) - Sun 28 Dec 2008
LOL. Oh, dear. Poor Sesshoumaru -- he really had no idea what he was in for. My only critique would be that you had a couple minor typos/grammatical issues that can probably be easily fixed with a once-over (for example 'rouse' for 'ruse'), but other than that definitely a cute one-shot. Short, sweet and to the point, just the way I like 'em.
Thanks for sharing! =)
Hah! Oh, my duck! That is amazing! I think I sat there for a minute laughing. That's priceless.
It's a great oneshot, I'm glad I read it. =D
| wow what an interesting bet *giggle* i can imagine the person giving the wax face.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Dec 2008
LMAO how did i miss this? TOo funny! Poor Sesshoumaru he is so in for it. Thats why you dont bet right there!!
Maru (Chapter 1) - Fri 26 Dec 2008
| Nice. Short, sweet, to the point, and fun. I thought the flow was a bit off and it lacked detail, but besides that, kudos.
Maru
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