I LOVED this chapter!! I could not have come up with a better description of Sesshoumaru's hair: 'magic and happiness.' That was absolutely priceless!!! Well things seem to be moving along nicely. I feel that this truce they have come to will open the door for greater things. I can't wait to see if those things involve the removal of clothing! XD

The end of the chapter was rather exciting. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Oh, almost forgot, I can't remember if it was chapter 13 or 14, but the part where Kagome imagines herself wandering off into the woods to discover if the trees a mile away from the campsite were as boring as the trees back at camp, was absolutely hilarious to me!! LMAO!!!

Forgive this Sianna for the super late review!!! *gives puppy dog eyes*

Now that that's over, great chapter!! I loved that Kagome got old Sesshy to talk about his dad and the battle with the bear demon was a nice touch. I was kinda glad that Sesshoumaru didn't jump in and save her and that she managed to save herself. Okay, off I go to read the next chapter. Again, great work!

i'd love how they start to feel more about each other, that's more realistic than....puff ooo my good i like her and the other way a round , sorry for my poor english i speak spanish  so i'll tell you in spanish  ME ENCANTO, SIGUE ESCRIBIENDO ASI!

well i hope u never get to go throu that ....

super awsume incredible fic your writin and i  hope to read more as soon......

i was wanderig....is kaome going to be kidnaped now wile \sesshoumaru is busy or are  u waiting for deaper filigs to develop from him so that he actualy gets a litle despret before he hinds her???

love the story    Lumiere

Sweet God, you are a comic genius. I just keep laughing like I belong in a padded cell. More importantly, though, you slip very sweet and tender scenes in between the humor. Quite a refreshing story you've got here. Great stuff!

I'm sorry you haven't gotten many reviews lately.  They are the icing on the cake of a story.  Your story is very amusing.  I like the lines and thoughts you give the characters.  They are funny.  It's nice that I don't trip over constant errors.  I like the current action taking place.  Kagome 'dusted' a bear youkai!  Yay!  I can't wait to see what happens with this next foe.  ^_^

Thank you for writing and posting this story.  You're doing a wonderful job and I'm sure it's hard work.

I'd write a longer review... but I'm tired and my head hurts. This chapter made me laugh from beginning to end.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!  The last chapter was hilarious, and I love your storytelling..the humor is great.  I can find no fault whatsoever with your grammar, punctuation, etc. either.  Keep up the great work, and thank you for writing such a wonderful story.  Kagome just has no fear does she!?  And, I love that she just is not impressed with gods, or lordships, or whatever.

Hi darlin'!! The first thing I want to say, is DO NOT feel pressured into doing/writing anything you are not ready to write yet!! This is YOUR story, and if you feel that it will set the proper mood to draw things out, then you just draw them out baby!!! I have learned that the story is far more satisfying when it is done that way!

Now that that has been said,  I will tell you that I quite enjoyed this chapter. I like how you portray Sesshoumaru. He has that sort of cold detachment to himself, but he also seems kinda curious at times. He is not overly quiet, nor needlessly cruel.  Very nice! As most of us know, he is rather a difficult character to portray well, and I like your take on him! Keep up the good work!