Reviews for Curiosity by KitsunenoTama

beckyducky (Chapter 11) - Tue 02 Feb 2010

Yey!! An update!! That shippo is so smart! *cuddles* Can't wait for more!

ducky out.


beckyducky (Chapter 2) - Mon 01 Feb 2010

Mystery:
Lol - sesshoumaru thinking kagome was committing suicide was a laugh. I normally dont read drabbles because they're too short but this is pretty interersting!

Surprise:
This chapter reminded me of a jack-in-the-box.  idk, my mind wanders into places i dont want to know.  Sesshoumaru is really a curious guy even though he pretends to be aloof (*cough*rin*cough*). It was a surpise for kagome but a promise as well. niiiice!

Suspicion:
Aww kagome, you were never the best liar! *snarfle* you're really good at this! It's harder to express yourself with fewer words than with many. Each chapter is so good! (i can't get over the fact that i actually like a drabble...bizarre..)

Decision:
Kagome is so impulsive. She's just like "what the heck.  I'll tell him." lawl...

Wound:
And Kagome thinks pretty well on her feet! Yes - no matter how much people protect her, she is always kidnapped.  Using that to her advantage was pretty crafty!

Honesty:
Also Kagome is talkative. TALK TALK TALK TALK.... i dont blame her tho! I liked that you didnt write out Sesshoumaru's gratitude and just used kagome to imply his thankfulness. Nice tech!

Watching:
Le-Gasp! Do i detect hints of...romance?!

Human:
Yes indeed, Sesshoumaru's heart is melting faster than an icecube in hell...(but his heart is a ginormous iceberg so it might take a while....lol)

Worry:
It was too good to last.  Kagome always failed at ninja skills. (Kakashi: you get an F! An F, I tell you!!)

Secret:
Noooo this is the last chapter for now?!?!? 

Overall:
1. Okay, grammar/spelling/mechanics = beautiful.
2. Concept/how the story started = 456/10
3. My favorite so far is chapter one: mystery. As I've mentioned, i dont like drabbles too much, but your fic is just worth a reading and more!
4. FUNNY!!!! (and i wont give specific examples because everything is freaking hilarious.)
5. Update.  AHORA!!!! (espanol for NOW!) thank you! <3


Stacerue (Chapter 9) - Sat 30 Jan 2010

i really like drabbles, especially ones that tell a story. It's very well-written and my own curiosity can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the good work.


Sessylove219 (Chapter 9) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

I love interconnected drabbles like this! It's like I can get my fix in a very small amount of time! Good job!


CritterWhisperer (Chapter 9) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

This is a cute story so far.  It's well written and the drabbles are tied together well.  I look forward to seeing where the plot goes.


sesshys_jaded_samuri (Chapter 9) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

I love like connected ficlets like this.  They are short and to the point, but still give us insight into the characters. Well done.  I do hope that you update this again soon, as I quickly became hooked.


Ikaru (Chapter 9) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

very good start, everythings short sweet and to the point, can't wait to see what you come up with next!!


Hairann (Chapter 9) - Fri 29 Jan 2010

Very good start so far and can not wait to see what happens next.  Keep up the good work.

 

Hairann


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