Yaaaay! Omg, I love this story, I'm so glad you're back to finish it!! Update soon :D
Hey, I just wanted to tell you why I've unliked Cherry Bomb. I haven't kept up with it, so tonight I was rereading it so I could catch up. But then I got to the part where Sesshoumaru punished her for being late to work by sexually frustrating her. I really worry when people put out works that accept that kind of behavior. Girls may say that they know not to let a man toy with them, but the fact is that what they read does influence them, even if they don't realize it. That kind of behavior by a man is a power play; it has nothing to do with love or honest lust. It's a way to break a woman, to enforce his wants and needs over hers. In fact, by sexually punishing an employee for being late, he legally committed sexual harrassment, and depending on state law, rape.
I'm putting this down in a review, because I want to address this for everyone. Everyone, even fanfic writers, need to stand up against sexual abuse, male or female. One of the reasons sexual harrassment and date rape was and can still be so very hard to prosecute is because it has been socially acceptable for so long. After all, romance novels had date rape... it was considered fine for a man to force a woman, as long as she enjoyed herself at some point. In fact, beginning as early as the 1970s, the romance publishing industry pushed writers to incorporate rape in their novels if they wanted to be published. They didn't stop until the late 1990s.
If you are going to keep your story like this, please put up a warning that it contains illegal, abusive sexual behavior. If you want a very good website to check out rape myths and facts, go to https://well.wvu.edu/articles/rape_myths_and_facts.
Pamela (Chapter 14) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
Haha! Great story! Love how Kagome used her womanly wiles on Sesshoumaru with her school girl costume, nice touch. The party promises to be very interesting. Love how all the characters come together and interact what a great alternate universe you have penned. I really like this story. great job!
Koree (Chapter 14) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
Kagome has him whipped lol
Next chapter pleases.
Deana (Chapter 14) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
This is a really good story. Can't wait for the next update.
Cheryl (Chapter 14) - Sat 19 Sep 2015
very nice story you got here~ thanks for the update and hope to see the next chapter soon :)
I just read this story a few minutes ago on fanfiction up to chapter 10, it's a great story. Keep it coming.
Alii (Chapter 13) - Mon 03 Sep 2012
WoohWoohoWooh
Ally (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Apr 2011
roo86 (Chapter 1) - Tue 03 Aug 2010
Hey I found your story the other day and I LOVE it! It is such a unique storyline. Pour Kooga he can't win in any universe. I hope you update soon this is really worth reading. Thanks for your efforts.
Patricia (Chapter 13) - Thu 01 Jul 2010
i freakin love kohaku and Rin!!! cant wait for sess to meet the fam!!
:3 HOT. And poor Sango! LOL Can't wait for more
Patricia (Chapter 12) - Sat 26 Jun 2010
omg rin and kohaku are so freakin adorable!!!! love the story ill be waitng for the updates! i want sess to meet kags family!
Dear Asphy:
This is a really great story! Very sexy and with great plot and characters! But I am really sad that updates seem to come few and far in between!
The new chapter was great! Kagome is really glowing, and it's funny that she has all those marks around her neck and is the last to figure it out!
I love Rin's character!! She is awesome and I am really loving the idea of her and Kohaku getting together!! I look forward to that!
Sesshomaru was really cool to allow Kagome to have the day to prepare for the exam! In the same note, I am DYING to find out what Sesshomaru said to Hojo sensei!!! Hehehehehehe!! I love the fact that he is feeling protective towards Kagome!!
The scene when Kagome kisses him softly on the lips was really tender and a very romantic moment!! Loved it!!
I hope you will find the time and inspiration to update soon, this story is really great and I really look forward to your next update!!
Thank you for writing and sharing!
MidCat
This is one of my top-favorite favorites~!!! ^_^
And I mean it! This story is somehow & undescribaly different from the other fanfics, it actually made me feel what was going on.
♥ it!! ;3
Ja ne,
Kukuro-chan~? ^^;
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