| wow i like it please keep going u are doing a great job keep up the good work
loveless (Chapter 2) - Mon 10 Aug 2009
| I love the fanfic before this sequel. This one has promise. Thanks for FINALLY updating. The next chapter sounds like it will be interesting. Please update FASTER.
| I loved "In the Elevator", and was so happy to see a sequel. It is awesome. I can't wait to find out what happens between Kagome and Sesshomaru next. It had to be disconcerting to have all the demons she passed sniffing her, and the female demons will be unbearable! You are an amazing author, your stories make me really happy. I hope you can add to this one very soon...
| I'm really happy you made an sequel and love how it started and can't wait till the next update
REDWOLF (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 May 2009
| Great start, now I am wondering just how Kagome will feel about HOW she will THINK she got the job!
Arryelle (Chapter 1) - Wed 29 Apr 2009
Hey I loved the First chappie, A few key points I would say about it, is that Souta was far to formal to be Kags younger brother she sounded less formal unless that's how you want it, I just thought he sounded way too adult like. There are simple typos and grammar mistakes but easily corrected once you read it over again or have a Beta. But Other than that the plot is amazing and I can't wait for more.
Thanks,
Arry
katlady (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2009
NO FAIR :(
You should have conflict = Koga, may be Naruku
Drama= Sesshoumaru and Inuyashas dad if you chose to have him a live or even make them brothers and that could also be the pressure point his father wanting grandchildren
LEMON LOTS AND LOTS OF LEMONS ENOUGH TO MAKE A PIE!!!
katie (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Apr 2009
| wow i like it please keep going
demonvixen2002 (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
| FINALLY!!!! I love the first story u wrote!!!! But I have been waiting if u were going to do a sequel. YAY U DID THANK U!!!
babygirl 19 (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
| Finally the sequel to my favorite fanfic is up! Thank u so nuch for finally writing it, i was beginning to think u had given it up or decided not to write it.Anyway thanks so much can't wait till he next chapter! Please update soon!
Connie (Chapter 1) - Sat 18 Apr 2009
ahhh finally a sequel! :DDD
addiesmoon (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
| thank you so much i loved reading in the elevator and have been hope for more. i have been wanting to see how her life at the office will be. can't wait for chapter two
| Happy dance of love! A sequel to your elevator story! Please, make it long and update soon. You have made my day!
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