I don't even know how many times I've reread this, but I'm sure more are to come~
lara (Chapter 2) - Mon 25 Apr 2011
I loved this story. It seems all of your stories are enjoyable.
Eris (Chapter 2) - Wed 05 Jan 2011
I am a huge fan of your work, but this one seemed to be one of my favs. Awesome work!
| Just wanted to say that I loved this story. There is no one that is a cool as Sesshoumaru. Love this guy!
Nyuka (Chapter 2) - Mon 15 Jun 2009
| That was such a great story thank you for writing it, it was sad that Inuyasha and Kagome to take so long to for give and for get, but I'm glad they eventruly did, love the ending....XD..............Nyuka
Beautifully written! Its very well done. I am almost disappointed that it is finished.
Just be careful of possesion and gender! "his, hers, he, she." There were a lot of mistakes in that area. But overall, it was a great story to read!
good luck
Kirai (Chapter 2) - Mon 15 Jun 2009
| That was sweet hun. I love happy endings. And it was so realistic. Good for you, such a good ending to a great story.
miwa03 (Chapter 2) - Mon 15 Jun 2009
| Great story! You are one of my fave authors!! Keep writing!
Diane (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Jun 2009
Well the plot is good, the word choice is kinda bad though, it doesn't make a lot of sense in lots of places because 1 or more of the words chosen isn't the right 1.
Kirai (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Jun 2009
| Oh hun, that was hot! I loved it. If you ever do add more to this i'll be dying to read it. I like how Kagome tuaght him how to kiss with mouths. I always find stuff like that the sweetest and most memorable.
| oh lord u have to continue this please it was so well written. more more more
| I think you had a few mistakes with "him", "her", "his", and "hers" it's all throughout the lemon scene but other than that this is a really good story
katlady (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
reay good you should make a sequal
| This is great! Please write more...
chii (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
i hope there'll be a mating on the next one. i certainly do expect a happy ending to sess cold and frigid life
chii (Chapter 1) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
hope you continue soon. this is kind of a unique story, something i want to read to the end.
keep up the good work
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