I just noticed that a while ago and fixed it but I might redo the story someday once I'm a better writer.
Rofl instead of "Balcony window" you said "Baloney window." lmao I almost peed myself laughing. But, other than that funny mixup...its pretty interesting xD just be careful of mistakes (no matter how funny)
katlady (Chapter 1) - Tue 14 Apr 2009
its good so far but you might want to remove the code
Rj (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2009
i hope you make kagome the master and sesshomaru the slave =)
Rj (Chapter 1) - Sun 12 Apr 2009
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