I found this by way or your fanart. It's a great little one shot. I really like the flow. It's short and to the point, but it doesn't leave you scratching your head to figure out how they came to be together, or to care for each other.
Great job.
~Starfyre
I thought this was very cute, and I wonder why I haven't seen it til now! Thanks for the good read :)
Noacat (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
What a lovely piece. I love the way you implied sex rather than going on for pages and pages describing it. Sometimes your own imagination is far better than anything an author can come up with. Well done.
| I really enjoyed this. The poem was beautiful. You can sense that the two were more to each other than just companions but they each denied the emotions felt. This stands on it's own very well as a one shot. You got an opportunity to make a fic out of it if you so desired but alone says it all. JEN
MontiK (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
That was really sweet. Short but to the point. The whole image of their first kiss was very romantic. Really great for your first oneshot! Keep writing! :D
MontiK
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