Fantastic job! Every new chapter is a delight to read! Great job!
I find that after watching the anime that Inuyasha is pretty abusive towards Shippo, so I can see why he was forced to be cold towards Kagome like that. Thank you for updating your story, it's very well done and great to read.
THis is realy good
Two more chapters be for I turn in for the night! Thank you so much for the gift. I'm truly enjoying the story and I really love the way your writing the characters. I love a strong Kagome. I also think you did a wonderful job dealing with the situation with Shippo. He deserves to be forgiven he was scared into the others plan. Their actions are inexcusable and I don't think they should be forgiven anytime soon if ever. Don't they say "The road to hell is paved with good intentions." The others thought they new better and broke her for her own good. God save me from stupidity! Sesshoumaru and his curiosity are wonderful I can't wait to see how your going to develop their relationship. On another note I really love the character of Storm and I hope we see more of him in the chapters to come.
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I love this story!!! Everything about it so far is terrific!! I totally love kickass Kagome!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
Interesting so far and kind of cool to see a bad ass pissed off Kagome. Thanks and update soon!
It's a good story so far I can't wait to see the reason that the others abandoned Kagome like that, and I can't wait to see the confrontation between Kagome and Kikyo( if there is one).
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