I LOVED this story, but, as I do with a lot of stories, I just wish it had an epilogue.
ponpiri (Chapter 4) - Mon 26 Jun 2017
I was cringing so hard! Why didn't they lock the daggone door??? I love your writing style so much, especially how you changed the vocabulary and tone up depending on the perspective. This little story packs a punch in its brevity.
Amy (Chapter 4) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
A FULL BLOWN ROMANCE, ABOUT TIME!GREAT WORK!
A very well written and lovely romance.
OMG!!! Lock the door!!!
| I totally thought this was a one-shot and if I hadn't seen the little next in the corner of my screen I would've missed out on a really good read. It was really good and I'm soooo happy I was wrong.
Gentleman J (Chapter 4) - Thu 07 Aug 2008
| This was quite the interesting read.
Quite indeed.
FleetingDream (Chapter 4) - Tue 05 Aug 2008
| wow this is amazing, I can't believe I hadn't read this sooner. Yea you are now offically one of my favorite author's :-D have a cookie!!!!
| Awwwwww
I don't think you should be frustrated about that ending, lass. I find it quite good. I understand the feeling though, but sometimes I assume we lowly writers are just doomed to submit to our unrully muses. lol
And what a muse you have!! ^_^
Please, keep on the good job. I'm eager to read whatever you'll deign to write in that exquisite style of yours. XD
Dewa mata
| Awwwwww
I don't think you should be frustrated about that ending, lass. I find it quite good. I understand the feeling though, but sometimes I assume we lowly writers are just doomed to submit to our unrully muses. lol
And what a muse you have!! ^_^
Please, keep on the good job. I'm eager to read whatever you'll deign to write in that exquisite style of yours. XD
Dewa mata
L-desu (Chapter 4) - Thu 19 Jun 2008
| this was a great way to end the fic. subtle, but not overly brash. you need not worry; i enjoyed it immensely. the last few lines left little fuzzies in my heart. job well done!
| Oh my God, perfect ending line. I loved this story. It was both an emotional whirlwind and a wise lesson on what it means to be happy. It was both tender and passionate. You couldn't have wrapped it up any better.
Nobody (Chapter 4) - Wed 18 Jun 2008
| great :)i love it!
Anna (Chapter 4) - Wed 18 Jun 2008
| Very cute--and I liked the ending...especially the part where you bring in that line from champagne and he says that he is very lucky!
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Wed 18 Jun 2008
| Perfect. Absolutely Perfect Happiness. Thank you so much for this delightful read. It's one of my favorite stories and I'm so glad Your work is a treasure and I'm proud to consider you one of my favorite writers.
| Wow! How very interesting! Maybe next time InuYasha will think twice before doing the things he does to Kagome!! LOL! I would love to have seen Sesshomaru's face when he realizes who is standing there!! I so love this story! Your writing flows very well and keeps us all glued to the screen to see what will happen next! Great job! I'm so looking forward to the next chapter...it's getting intense!!
serasvictoria666 (Chapter 3) - Mon 02 Jun 2008
| Ha! It was Inuyasha! I'm dying to find out what happens next! Take care! ^-^
Kagome357 (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Jun 2008
| Awwww...you are so kind to give me a shout out! I think it's wonderful that you continued this and it's turning out better than I thought it would! "I'm dead and this is Hell." Priceless! Serves Inuyasha right! I love how Sess was so tender when he found out she was a virgin. You know, most guys are like "I got mine..." *sighing romantically* Beautiful!
Lily (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 Jun 2008
| Kagome's first time is definitely memorable. Can't wait to see how this unfolds.
JustaGirl (Chapter 2) - Wed 21 May 2008
| Wow... you are fantastic. This is a wonderful story :) Thank you!
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