pauly (Chapter 2) - Tue 23 Aug 2011

Hi, I just want to tell you that I think this story is really interesting so far, I like your writing style and I like how you write sessh character. I'm sorry I can't give you any ideas, but truth is I couldn't write a story even if my life depend on it. I think you're a talented author and should continue this great story.


Coastin (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Aug 2011

this is pretty awesome


Paradise_Kiss (Chapter 2) - Mon 22 Aug 2011

Ya better update soon ;>


Angelic Memories (Chapter 1) - Thu 26 Mar 2009
Hey... remember me? Anyway I finished reading your story (I'm in another class) and I have to say I am quite glad I read it. Although this is probably just me and my dark nature coming out but the ending of the chapter with Sesshomaru was excellently done and it leaves you wondering and wanting more. What I did notice is there isn't much character description. I understand that many people take advantage that their readers know what a person looks like but it's adds to the story. Adding to their physical appearance adds to understanding the character, because they way you protray them in the words you use leaves an opinon on that character's nature. Much like you described Sesshomaru as an animal. Overall I did enjoy it! Can't wait to read more.

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
No money is being made from the creation or viewing of content on this site, which is strictly for personal, non-commercial use, in accordance with the copyright.