Very nice installment! I like the detail of her ring slipping off her finger because of all the weight she has lost due to stress. I also liked all the demons pulling back their auras as soon as she flares hers! I swear I had the vision of slugs shrinking from salt!
This is a nice blend of happy and sad. The reader is treated to their good times, and then saddened it has all come to an end. I like how you brought Inuyasha into the story too! I shall now sit here and wait for another chapter!
katie (Chapter 2) - Wed 08 Apr 2009
| why?
katie (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Apr 2009
| wow that is good i like it please keep going
katie (Chapter 1) - Wed 01 Apr 2009
| wow that is good i like it please keep going
LC Rose (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
| Love me a drunk, Sango! And I liked this. The beginning was DEPRESSING AS HELL (but in a good way), but I am pumped in the "this will have a happy ending" direction on a feeling. Let me know when you update next as you know my internet standings right now.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Fri 20 Mar 2009
oooo im excited to see the next chaper. Good job itl!
Possessed (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Mar 2009
AH! My long wait is finally over... and this was worth the wait! You really have a great start to your story... the night out at the bar was hilarious! It added just the right touch to the present day sadness she is currently going through, keeping the chapter from becoming too heavy right out of the gate.
Nice job Inu, really great chapter!
marquisha (Chapter 1) - Tue 17 Mar 2009
| Omg! I can't wait to see tha next chapter! Please please update b/c that is a great chapter.
I'm still giggling over that blue balls line. I will probably be giggling over that for a while. Keep up the awesome, lady!
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