Very nice installment! I like the detail of her ring slipping off her finger because of all the weight she has lost due to stress. I also liked all the demons pulling back their auras as soon as she flares hers! I swear I had the vision of slugs shrinking from salt!
This is a nice blend of happy and sad. The reader is treated to their good times, and then saddened it has all come to an end. I like how you brought Inuyasha into the story too! I shall now sit here and wait for another chapter!
oooo im excited to see the next chaper. Good job itl!
AH! My long wait is finally over... and this was worth the wait! You really have a great start to your story... the night out at the bar was hilarious! It added just the right touch to the present day sadness she is currently going through, keeping the chapter from becoming too heavy right out of the gate.
Nice job Inu, really great chapter!
I'm still giggling over that blue balls line. I will probably be giggling over that for a while. Keep up the awesome, lady!
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