Alls I have to say is... MOAR. This is seriously some good stuff.

OH MY!  You must continue this.  No matter how many times i read a stiuation like this, it never fails to make my throat tight.  I almost felt like crying for Kagome. 

Besides just a few errors, the first chapter was amazing!  I had this feeling that Sess was cheating since you kept on building it up to where she met everybody, and then Touga tried to stop Kagome from going to the office.  I felt horrible for Miroku that Sango slept with Sesshomaru.  No doubt poor Kagome probably miscarried now. ;-;  Well, update soon!  I can't wait to read the next installment for your next chapter! XD

Wow that was so great Lady S! PLLLLEASE update soon!

~CR~