Forget that! He up and divorces her with no reason and leaves her alone for 2 years and she's just going to give him another chance? Just like that? Even if she's skeptical, girlfriend needs to grow a backbone. 

What about  the sword? Why kill rin? If it was suppose to work as a catalyst to get them back together, I'm due there was another way. Especially since they broke up for such a trivial matter.i guess what's done is done but one death after the other is just so depressing

I absolutely love this story. It grabbed be from the beginning and refused to let go. I laughed. I cried. I smacked my computer, wishing I could smack him for being such an idiot. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. She took him back. It's sad that it took Rin's death to bring it about. What will everyone else's reaction be?

I was amazed when I read that English is a second language for you. You have done a much better job than a lot of authors I have read who are native English speakers. I only noticed a few problems, and they were words that have the same sound, but different meanings and spellings. That's what makes English so difficult I'm told. And probably the same reason we have difficulty with other languages. We have a hard enough time with our own. lol. Anyway, excellent job. Both with the story and your English.

I love it! I cant wait to see what happens!!!!

ok i want to know what happens now! I'll wait here on the review page.

*Grabs camping gear. 

I have survived a great many fics camping on the reviews page. WOnderful job, if not terribly sad, terribly terribly sad. But i want to know what happens. I like your characters a lot so in character in an au universe wonderful!.

*cries

He took it off? Whats wrong with him? Nicely done if not terribly sad.

you know i passed by this few times, but im so glad i clicked this go around. Your writing is enthralling to say the least. Im cant wait to read then next chapter  but this one was very well done so i had to tell you. Great job!!

That was one of the saddest chappie I've ever read in any fanfic... You did an amazing job portraying the emotions of a 6 yr old... I was tearing up at the end of the chappie. I just wanted to give Shippou a big hug and never let go cuz no one should have to deal with such pain and loss at such a young age. To lose a grandfather and a sister w/in two weeks is just soo much to deal with. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon cuz I'm curious of how Sess will get Kagome to give him another chance. :P

nice. i am really looking forward to the next chapter! please update soon

Very good beginning! Can't wait to see more!