I absolutely love this story. It grabbed be from the beginning and refused to let go. I laughed. I cried. I smacked my computer, wishing I could smack him for being such an idiot. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. She took him back. It's sad that it took Rin's death to bring it about. What will everyone else's reaction be?
I was amazed when I read that English is a second language for you. You have done a much better job than a lot of authors I have read who are native English speakers. I only noticed a few problems, and they were words that have the same sound, but different meanings and spellings. That's what makes English so difficult I'm told. And probably the same reason we have difficulty with other languages. We have a hard enough time with our own. lol. Anyway, excellent job. Both with the story and your English.
| Tee hee, the demons are Christians, Kagome still lives on shrine, must be shinto...
| awww this chapter was so sweet...please continue soon
| i loved the chapter but im still mad at you that you killed rin but also ecstatic that you had sesshomaru realize the mistake he made that is more important than anything at that moment so they both including shippo could cope with losing rin together as a family........but ayway please continue soon
Nobody (Chapter 7) - Sun 05 Apr 2009
I love it! I cant wait to see what happens!!!!
Nobody (Chapter 6) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
ok i want to know what happens now! I'll wait here on the review page.
*Grabs camping gear.
I have survived a great many fics camping on the reviews page. WOnderful job, if not terribly sad, terribly terribly sad. But i want to know what happens. I like your characters a lot so in character in an au universe wonderful!.
Nobody (Chapter 3) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
*cries
He took it off? Whats wrong with him? Nicely done if not terribly sad.
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
you know i passed by this few times, but im so glad i clicked this go around. Your writing is enthralling to say the least. Im cant wait to read then next chapter but this one was very well done so i had to tell you. Great job!!
That was one of the saddest chappie I've ever read in any fanfic... You did an amazing job portraying the emotions of a 6 yr old... I was tearing up at the end of the chappie. I just wanted to give Shippou a big hug and never let go cuz no one should have to deal with such pain and loss at such a young age. To lose a grandfather and a sister w/in two weeks is just soo much to deal with. Keep up the good work and I hope you update soon cuz I'm curious of how Sess will get Kagome to give him another chance. :P
| why did you have to kill little rin?? what did she ever do to you?? she was just a swee and innocent little girl, i hope this is all a dream or something cause this is just crazy......but please update soon
Silverinumiko (Chapter 3) - Wed 18 Mar 2009
| that was sad
I think and i can't believe i am writing this but Inuyasha is right for once
Sesshomaru screwed up and by the last paragraph, he obviously is still in love with her, but he saw his mother get hurt from her relationship with his father and how her love went on with out notice. He says he sees the same look in Kagome's eyes and is afraid that they will end up like his parents.
Sesshomaru needs to come back to his sense and get back together eith Kagome before it's too late, for both of them and their 2 kids.
| SESSHOMARU IS A DUMBASS HEARTLESS PERSON!!!!!!!!! >=[ i cnt believe he did that ugh poor kags...i hope she does find someone new and then we'll see what he has to say about that
| Awwwww Inupapa died...bummer *sobs* I love Inupapa..oh well.
Dang Sessh, you have serious problems to just take the mark a way just like that n.n
Please continue...
| awwwwww he's dying.....and why hasnt sesshomaru released kagome of their mating bond?? it only makes me wonder...what could possibly be going on in his head...please continue soon
Surreal (Chapter 1) - Sat 14 Mar 2009
nice. i am really looking forward to the next chapter! please update soon
Very good beginning! Can't wait to see more!
SEB (Chapter 1) - Wed 11 Mar 2009
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