A journey that takes a lifetime, immortalised in not so many words. An insight into humanity, immortal, eternity... everything, really. I can't really say anything more, because it would probably retract from the brilliance of the story, and the message of hope and redemption left behind at the very end.
Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. There are no more words.
MontiK (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Mar 2009
Heartbreaking, epic, more than words can describe. This is amazing... and I can't think of more to say because I'm totally floored right after reading this. I admire your writing, this was beautiful.
MontiK
I almost didn't review this oneshot... not because I didn't like it, quite the contrary really... I was moved to tears.
And I'm not really creative with reviews when a writer leaves me in such a state, emotions are running wild, but I feel calm, almost relaxed, full yet empty... that's hard to explain without sounding like a lunatic, but I guess it's alright.
Because, if you're able to write such a moving piece of art, you can understand even the raving of a mad reader... can't you?
I think mankind can only find peace, and start really living, when they don't fear their own death anymore.
Thank you for the journey, my friend.
Dewa mata
That was breathtaking. It left a tight feeling in my chest. Brava!
Ohhh, that was beautiful, and powerful.
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